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Array ( [sid] => 2365 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murderer [time] => 2002-08-16 19:56:19 [hometext] => We all lost a friend last year, just three days after the Sept. 11th terrorist attacks. These are the words I choose to speak to her murderer, suicide. [bodytext] => She would have been 18 today
But you took her precious life away
You took her entire life away
And everything she could have had today
Because of you she does not speak
She can't smile, and she'll never breathe
You made it so she can't even breathe
So many words, she'll never speak
Thanks to you, we celebrate her past
Her precious life you ended so fast
How could you end her life so fast?
Now every moment to spend with her has passed
Now all we have are memories
But do you think this puts our pain at ease?
Will you ever put our minds at ease?
On her special 18th birthday, all she is is memories
And now you're free to strike again
Causing some other family excruciating pain
How many people will you honor with pain?
When will you strike again?
I hope she left with dignity and grace
And faced you honorably, face to face
I hope she spat right in your face
Before you stole her beauty and grace
You took away our Sejla Ann
Our chance to hold Sejla's hand
What did you do to her hand?
How could you do this to Sejla Ann?
Now on her day you'd better hide
And I will never let you inside
I hate you, you'll never have my mind
I hate you, I hate you so much, suicide [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SeXyDrAgOn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Murderer

Contributed by SeXyDrAgOn on Friday, 16th August 2002 @ 07:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She would have been 18 today
But you took her precious life away
You took her entire life away
And everything she could have had today
Because of you she does not speak
She can't smile, and she'll never breathe
You made it so she can't even breathe
So many words, she'll never speak
Thanks to you, we celebrate her past
Her precious life you ended so fast
How could you end her life so fast?
Now every moment to spend with her has passed
Now all we have are memories
But do you think this puts our pain at ease?
Will you ever put our minds at ease?
On her special 18th birthday, all she is is memories
And now you're free to strike again
Causing some other family excruciating pain
How many people will you honor with pain?
When will you strike again?
I hope she left with dignity and grace
And faced you honorably, face to face
I hope she spat right in your face
Before you stole her beauty and grace
You took away our Sejla Ann
Our chance to hold Sejla's hand
What did you do to her hand?
How could you do this to Sejla Ann?
Now on her day you'd better hide
And I will never let you inside
I hate you, you'll never have my mind
I hate you, I hate you so much, suicide




Copyright © SeXyDrAgOn ... [ 2002-08-16 19:56:19]
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Re: Murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 10:10:54 AM AEST
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Very good poem, sad to think that this is going on daily. Sorry for your lost , I know this is many months to late but reading your poem today has made me feel the sadness you felt or still is.


Re: Murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:37:19 AM AEST
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Judging by the last lines there some serious pain your going through in which case i'm so sorry. It's never ending the war between good and evil. why these things happen are beyond me and make me hate the fact we can never realy do anything about it or we'd be stoped so as to protect the bad guys great writting as always. Take care Dragon.


Ben




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