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Array ( [sid] => 23621 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A lil girl saw the sea [time] => 2003-09-22 03:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw a little girl
big blue eyes glittered

the girl walked through the city
and suddenly she saw the sea

she stopped walking and stared
stopped breathing at the moment

She shone like a star
and ran the stairs from the city, down

Ran and hurried to touch the sea
and forgot about the world completely

She took her shoes off
and slowly walked

Through the soft sand into the sea
for her it was amazing

Her feet first stepped in him
the waves gently washing her body

And spattered were her trousers
and she walked further
her knees sunk in the water

Then she turned her back
on the beach,surprised, were her friends.

She felt such satisfaction
like she touched the heaven

Like she was dreaming a dream
like a child when got her first ice-cream

In her eyes tears
she felt happiness

Looking at waves,
no borders but huge space

She smiled
standing there for a while

and when stepped on the sand
her feet were wrapped

then shoeless walking on the beach
it was the right feeling, she needed to feel
the girl, was me....

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 54 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )
A lil girl saw the sea

Contributed by Aika on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



I saw a little girl
big blue eyes glittered

the girl walked through the city
and suddenly she saw the sea

she stopped walking and stared
stopped breathing at the moment

She shone like a star
and ran the stairs from the city, down

Ran and hurried to touch the sea
and forgot about the world completely

She took her shoes off
and slowly walked

Through the soft sand into the sea
for her it was amazing

Her feet first stepped in him
the waves gently washing her body

And spattered were her trousers
and she walked further
her knees sunk in the water

Then she turned her back
on the beach,surprised, were her friends.

She felt such satisfaction
like she touched the heaven

Like she was dreaming a dream
like a child when got her first ice-cream

In her eyes tears
she felt happiness

Looking at waves,
no borders but huge space

She smiled
standing there for a while

and when stepped on the sand
her feet were wrapped

then shoeless walking on the beach
it was the right feeling, she needed to feel
the girl, was me....





Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-09-22 03:35:00]
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Re: A lil girl saw the sea (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:51:01 AM AEST
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what a nice poem!! I enjoyed this a lot.. venkat


Re: A lil girl saw the sea (User Rating: 1 )
by nigelangel1 on Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:59:48 PM AEST
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I know a beautiful little girl with stunning blue eyes..I saw her run to the sea, and saw her laugh and spash with glee.....Wonderful words, captured a magical moment, Aika. Nig




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