Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:30:21 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 23603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Weird Feeling [time] => 2003-09-21 19:35:00 [hometext] => I found Something new to write about. [bodytext] => Today I had this weird feeling,
Mesmerized I was left kneeling,
In the sand where I’d felt all that devotion,
It was an explosion of beautiful emotion,

Together we watched the sun hide beneath the sea,
Now I know why they say, “I would die in ecstasy,”
Its such a delight that we ride upon the same bus,
Because as one we listened to the wind whistle around us

Walking home alone I felt the nearness of you,
Even though the rain had eagerly began to fall,
Wet thoroughly I was embraced by the nearness of you,
With no pain for the first time in the rain I stood tall.

Tonight as I will lay myself down to sleep,
I will dream high in the mountains of our future to be,
Now that I have this weird feeling so deep,
I speculate what kismet has in store for me.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ruby1987 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Weird Feeling

Contributed by ruby1987 on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Today I had this weird feeling,
Mesmerized I was left kneeling,
In the sand where I’d felt all that devotion,
It was an explosion of beautiful emotion,

Together we watched the sun hide beneath the sea,
Now I know why they say, “I would die in ecstasy,”
Its such a delight that we ride upon the same bus,
Because as one we listened to the wind whistle around us

Walking home alone I felt the nearness of you,
Even though the rain had eagerly began to fall,
Wet thoroughly I was embraced by the nearness of you,
With no pain for the first time in the rain I stood tall.

Tonight as I will lay myself down to sleep,
I will dream high in the mountains of our future to be,
Now that I have this weird feeling so deep,
I speculate what kismet has in store for me.

Copyright Â© ruby1987 ... [ 2003-09-21 19:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Weird Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by desertwispers on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:40:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

beautiful images
michelle

Re: Weird Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

great write... and yes, beautiful images ;)
but i love the rythm and rhyming of this also... very unique you are right... keep writing you are very talented

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com