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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Sent To Watch
[time] => 2003-09-21 14:05:00
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[bodytext] => He sat with his sister on the front step. A gloomy day, he told her how pretty she was, and how he missed the games they would play. She would take such good care of him.
Slowly raising her hands it turned as bright as the rising sun, she tickled his chin and made him laugh.
She blew the lock of golden hair from his forehead with such sweet breath. And he wondered if they all could do this? He missed her so much.
resting on the breeze that touched his ear, she had whispered........
only the angel`s that are sent to watch...Crow
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Sent To Watch
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crow
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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He sat with his sister on the front step. A gloomy day, he told her how pretty she was, and how he missed the games they would play. She would take such good care of him.
Slowly raising her hands it turned as bright as the rising sun, she tickled his chin and made him laugh.
She blew the lock of golden hair from his forehead with such sweet breath. And he wondered if they all could do this? He missed her so much.
resting on the breeze that touched his ear, she had whispered........
only the angel`s that are sent to watch...Crow
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 02:25:30 PM AEST
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The pictures you paint with your words are breathtaking my friend. This goes straight to the heart. Exceptional write
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 02:36:58 PM AEST
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I agree with Larry ...beautiful write
You sing to my soul
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 06:26:18 PM AEST
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 10:07:58 PM AEST
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I really didnt need these tears lol..Lucky they are beautiful ones ;)
*sighs* I just dont know what to say anymore...You never cease to bring beauty to my eyes and heart. |
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:25:32 AM AEST
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Eloquent words. Spoken and timed just right
Leave your readers intriqued and can see every sight!
I felt love, sadness, longing, and release....you've done it again, Crow....you always take me places I don't know...but it is a very pleasant journey.
I loved it Crow.
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:11:40 AM AEST
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| you take my breath away....then gently return it!!!!! wow!!!! |
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Re: Sent To Watch
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by Merry on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 11:39:21 AM AEST
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beautiful write - you have a magic to your voice, and obviously we all like to listen. You are a natural born stroyteller...
un beso
merry |
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