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Her blood is coursing, molten fire
Her heart is pounding, pulling her higher
But her eyes remain pools of brimming sorrow

Emotional stagnance has her enslaved
In rhythm to its emptiness is how she's behaved
Feeling far to lost to ever be saved
She realizes time is only hers to borrow

Her eyes cloud over with unshed tears
She bites back a sob and tucks away her fears
No one would guess in a million years
That she will end her yesterdays, tomorrow. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 368 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Tanna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Yesterday Ends Tomorrow

Contributed by Tanna on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She writhes breathlessly to the dance of desire
Her blood is coursing, molten fire
Her heart is pounding, pulling her higher
But her eyes remain pools of brimming sorrow

Emotional stagnance has her enslaved
In rhythm to its emptiness is how she's behaved
Feeling far to lost to ever be saved
She realizes time is only hers to borrow

Her eyes cloud over with unshed tears
She bites back a sob and tucks away her fears
No one would guess in a million years
That she will end her yesterdays, tomorrow.

Copyright © Tanna ... [ 2003-09-20 18:25:00]
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Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:01:04 PM AEST
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wow that was a really good poem i liked it alot good job keep writing

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:01:48 PM AEST
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this gave me chills...so sad, but so beautiful. m

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:13:37 PM AEST
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This is so full of emotion ... I love how you ended it Tanna ... great write ... Jan

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:30:25 PM AEST
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I really felt this poem inside and out. I loved your technique of rhyming aswell, stood out nicely. I especially liked the lines "Her heart is pounding, pulling her higher But her eyes remain pools of brimming sorrow" Very wonderful poem, Beautifully written.

*_-Psych-_*

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 05:41:38 PM AEST
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Emotional stagnance... I loved that line. Beautifully, and poetically written.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:56:16 AM AEST
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Tanna, this is a great write..emotionally touches the heart. venkat

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:10:50 AM AEST
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I agree that this write is absolutely awesome in a sad way. Your words could fully pull my emotion out through the poem. You are decribing how quite a lot of people feel, and yet a lot of people do not know. Thank you for sharing this poem that I can relate to.
Take Care.
Emma.

Re: Yesterday Ends Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:58:19 PM AEST
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Beautifully written... touches the reader deeply. Thank you.
Jenni

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