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Array ( [sid] => 23545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Went Outside Today [time] => 2003-09-20 14:25:00 [hometext] => Isn't life (edited) grand??? [bodytext] => I went outside today,
Guess what I saw??
You and my boyfriend,
Standing close,
Holding hands.

What ever happened to friendship??
What happened to you'll always be by my side??
Havent seen you in several months,
Till now.

You said it was too hard on you,
Watching me die.
Maybe it's just self pity,
Somehow I think it was harder on me....

I was always there,
Always dropped everything,
Nothing more important than you.

I saved your life once,
Some guy dumped you,
I'm the one who stopped your blood,
The one who breathed life back into you.

You have an interesting way,
Of repaying the trust I gave.
I went outside today,
I know what you didn't see....

He didnt see me standing there,
As he hugged you tightly.
You didn't see me crying,
As you kissed him good-bye. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kalika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I Went Outside Today

Contributed by Kalika on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I went outside today,
Guess what I saw??
You and my boyfriend,
Standing close,
Holding hands.

What ever happened to friendship??
What happened to you'll always be by my side??
Havent seen you in several months,
Till now.

You said it was too hard on you,
Watching me die.
Maybe it's just self pity,
Somehow I think it was harder on me....

I was always there,
Always dropped everything,
Nothing more important than you.

I saved your life once,
Some guy dumped you,
I'm the one who stopped your blood,
The one who breathed life back into you.

You have an interesting way,
Of repaying the trust I gave.
I went outside today,
I know what you didn't see....

He didnt see me standing there,
As he hugged you tightly.
You didn't see me crying,
As you kissed him good-bye.

Copyright © Kalika ... [ 2003-09-20 14:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Went Outside Today (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 02:43:55 PM AEST
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Ouch!! This must hurt a great deal! I hope things work out for you...
Jenni

Re: I Went Outside Today (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 05:30:41 PM AEST
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I hope she gets to read this and realize what a horrible friend she is to do such a heinous act!
May you move on and find peace,with a true love,not an artificial one.
Good luck to you!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: I Went Outside Today (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:06:59 PM AEST
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that is so sad! a friend who does a thing like that isnt worthy of your friendship or trust at all...but it was a good poem very sad good job and keep writing

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