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Array ( [sid] => 23540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I REMEMBERED YOU [time] => 2003-09-20 11:05:00 [hometext] => ........the only piece i've ever written that i wish i could hear music for............ [bodytext] => I remembered
I remembered
Your face cast shadows across her mind
I remembered
I remembered
Out with her sanity evil's all you'll find
I remembered
I remembered
Trace her past left so far behind
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you

Persecution through his fear
Desecrate her innocence
His hands committed evil
Her body does his penance.

I remembered
I remembered
A bargain for the silence
I remembered
I remembered
You left her world off balance
I remembered
I remembered
Broken mind of circumstance
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you

Purged her willful independence
Crushed her tiny soul
Choked the life's breath out of her
Raped her vanity leaving her unwhole

I remembered
I remembered
Your face casts shadows across her mind
I remembered
I remembered
Out with her sanity evil's all you'll find
I remembered
I remembered
Trace her past left so far behind
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you

TRANSPARENT EYES

BARGAINED LIVES

BROKEN TIES

UNFORGIVEN LIES

SSSSSSHHHHHH

HELD HER BREATH

AND

DIED

I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
A bargain for her silence
Leaving her world off balance
Cast the shadows form her mind
Seeking truth only evil to find
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
I remembered you
I remembered you [comments] => 7 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
I REMEMBERED YOU

Contributed by jaeann on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I remembered
I remembered
Your face cast shadows across her mind
I remembered
I remembered
Out with her sanity evil's all you'll find
I remembered
I remembered
Trace her past left so far behind
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you

Persecution through his fear
Desecrate her innocence
His hands committed evil
Her body does his penance.

I remembered
I remembered
A bargain for the silence
I remembered
I remembered
You left her world off balance
I remembered
I remembered
Broken mind of circumstance
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you

Purged her willful independence
Crushed her tiny soul
Choked the life's breath out of her
Raped her vanity leaving her unwhole

I remembered
I remembered
Your face casts shadows across her mind
I remembered
I remembered
Out with her sanity evil's all you'll find
I remembered
I remembered
Trace her past left so far behind
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you

TRANSPARENT EYES

BARGAINED LIVES

BROKEN TIES

UNFORGIVEN LIES

SSSSSSHHHHHH

HELD HER BREATH

AND

DIED

I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
A bargain for her silence
Leaving her world off balance
Cast the shadows form her mind
Seeking truth only evil to find
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
I remembered
I remembered
I remembered you
I remembered you
I remembered you




Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-09-20 11:05:00]
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Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:08:14 AM AEST
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I really have no words for this poem. It is so angry and full of emotion. I especially like the Transparant eyes part. Very well written.
Love and hope,
EmilyxXx


Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:42:25 AM AEST
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this is absolutely fantastic...i love it so much...has to be one of the best things i have read...so, so good...


Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:33:53 PM AEST
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Excellent.


Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 06:12:23 PM AEST
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so powerfully written...much emotion
very good write
Shari


Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:38:27 PM AEST
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WOW!! *gob smacked* Excellent!


Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:34:37 AM AEST
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I feel my mind is drifting in the waves of a sea of tears..venkat


Re: I REMEMBERED YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:39:55 AM AEST
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..sorry..this is an angry poem..so I have to say my mind is drifting in the waves of emotional music
venkat




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