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Array ( [sid] => 23538 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Broken Will [time] => 2003-09-20 09:45:00 [hometext] => from a passage into darkness........... [bodytext] => Dreaming in deceptions and living past some lies,
lost amid the underbrush of hatred's evil eyes.
Keeps you in the darkness,
a place of all your fears,
your destiny is broken,
your debts now in arrears.
Your dreams can tell the truth of all you cannot see,
what there is now and all it may be.
Trust in your sacred space and hide now from the day,
sent to wreak the havoc you once had sent away.
Chain free and risen so quickly now to take you from the edge,
broken will and troubled mind your life it has been pledged.
Head start to the forest break,
be gone from light before the rain,
shadows' witless fury,
strangers' tresspass into pain.
Caught up in a torrent to see a rainbow break the sky,
find shelter past the tree line,
the clouds are filled with lies.
Rest there in your circle to take solace from the pain,
they'll not find you in there,
going transparently insane.
The wind now roars its' discontent,
the storm has blinded sight,
wait here for the darknes to steal you in the night.
Rock to sleep the spirit that finds no rest to date,
here is where you've always been,
no use to disrupt fate.
All the lies distort the roadmap,
the visions all so true,
do not fear your space inside the circle,
you've found it right on cue.
Thunder ascends so loudly,
no one to hear your cries,
having lost a simple purpose,
take in one last sigh. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Broken Will

Contributed by jaeann on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Dreaming in deceptions and living past some lies,
lost amid the underbrush of hatred's evil eyes.
Keeps you in the darkness,
a place of all your fears,
your destiny is broken,
your debts now in arrears.
Your dreams can tell the truth of all you cannot see,
what there is now and all it may be.
Trust in your sacred space and hide now from the day,
sent to wreak the havoc you once had sent away.
Chain free and risen so quickly now to take you from the edge,
broken will and troubled mind your life it has been pledged.
Head start to the forest break,
be gone from light before the rain,
shadows' witless fury,
strangers' tresspass into pain.
Caught up in a torrent to see a rainbow break the sky,
find shelter past the tree line,
the clouds are filled with lies.
Rest there in your circle to take solace from the pain,
they'll not find you in there,
going transparently insane.
The wind now roars its' discontent,
the storm has blinded sight,
wait here for the darknes to steal you in the night.
Rock to sleep the spirit that finds no rest to date,
here is where you've always been,
no use to disrupt fate.
All the lies distort the roadmap,
the visions all so true,
do not fear your space inside the circle,
you've found it right on cue.
Thunder ascends so loudly,
no one to hear your cries,
having lost a simple purpose,
take in one last sigh.




Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-09-20 09:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Broken Will (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 10:43:42 AM AEST
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jaeann, this is an awesome poem. i've read it a few times now and will have to again, as there is so much here. when i began to realize my "internet soul mate" was a lie, i began to question my instinct, and all that i believed in. i am not sure if this is what you meant, but the end brings me to a place of recognition...within my circle, i am safe to regroup and venture out once more (the hard part!). your poem is well written, and seems to have layers to uncover with each read. i loved it. thanks for sharing.


Re: Broken Will (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 02:17:03 PM AEST
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:::::::sighs::::::::
This is really a nicely written poem. Depths
and layers.That's what poetry is all about!!!
Great job!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni


Re: Broken Will (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 06:15:09 PM AEST
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sadness overcame me as I read...a very powerful write

OpalDragon


Re: Broken Will (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:18:39 PM AEST
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Totally awesome ... truly wonderful poetry ... Jan


Re: Broken Will (User Rating: 1 )
by midian on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:24:32 PM AEST
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Wow a really inspirational poem. i found it captivating..
Well done
~x~ Carly ~x~


Re: Broken Will (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:14:55 PM AEST
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I read so many things in this, afraid to move, afraid to stand still. Crow




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