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I felt I needed to find a place where
I could hide from all this pain
So I welcomed the arrival of the thunderstorm and
Walked out in it's rain
I wandered through the streets that
Surround my home here on the coast
My body numb from freezing winds
I felt as lifeless as a ghost
I walked towards my favourite place
Where I go to clear my mind
Of all the worries of my life
In hope of answers I may find
I sit there on the rocky point
With the rain falling hard on me
It's then I cried the many tears
That desperately needed to be free
Some were happy,some were sad
Most were just because...
I live here,you live there
The same heart on 2 different shores... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Two Different Shores

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I felt I needed to find a place where
I could hide from all this pain
So I welcomed the arrival of the thunderstorm and
Walked out in it's rain
I wandered through the streets that
Surround my home here on the coast
My body numb from freezing winds
I felt as lifeless as a ghost
I walked towards my favourite place
Where I go to clear my mind
Of all the worries of my life
In hope of answers I may find
I sit there on the rocky point
With the rain falling hard on me
It's then I cried the many tears
That desperately needed to be free
Some were happy,some were sad
Most were just because...
I live here,you live there
The same heart on 2 different shores...

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-09-19 13:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by OpalDragon on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:08:51 PM AEST
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incredible write...very moving
Shari

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:29:22 PM AEST
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Whispers, this in a marvellous write..I absolutely love it..and can identify.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:59:32 PM AEST
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heart wrenchingly beautiful...rosie

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 04:04:30 PM AEST
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A very moving write. I also love thunderstorms and rain....somehow they help to cleanse the soul.
Thank you for your kind words on my work.
Sharon;)

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 04:08:44 PM AEST
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I cant say it's beautiful, because it fills me with too much heartache. I'll just hand you a rose in silence and blow a kiss into the wind.

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:31:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful, and heartbreaking.... Awesome

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:31:54 PM AEST
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I just have so much praise for your poems, they are so beautiful. and send the heart sailing. Crow

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:47:53 AM AEST
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You poor dear Whispers,
You poem touched my heart, but I'm afraid of water, so that part I can't relate to, but I know when someone's heart is breaking in two and I wish for you much peace in the rain or whereever you may be.
I send loving thoughts and warm hugs
lovingcritters
Connie
Your poem was so heartfelt!
and sincere!

Re: Two Different Shores (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:36:22 AM AEST
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This one is a heartbreaker - so sad. Hope you find all the answers you are looking for.
You have a wonderful ability to express your feelings in words, a true gift.

merry

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