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Array ( [sid] => 23457 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ~ Am I Not Forgiven ~ [time] => 2003-09-18 18:25:00 [hometext] => After I wrote this,I sat with the flute whispering in my ears..then I realised it is not the ~Great Spirit~ who hasn't forgiven.... [bodytext] =>

~oh small feathers with dancing feet
you flitter here and there,upon the earth
tiny keeper of twigs and leaves,tell me
what serves your soul the best......
so that you may fly with peace in your heart~

~Great Spirit~ why am I not cleansed
I have listened to you,felt your breath of wisdom on my face
Have I not danced beneath many moons,praising all you are
I have nurtured all creatures,loved freely with light heart
Hold me ~Great Spirit~
Know I am of your creation,purely
As the yellow is of the daffodils
And the feathers are of the Eagle
I too pray for your paintbrush to touch me
Make me of the rainbow,butterfly wings...anything..
But the darkness I walk in
~Great Spirit~
I kneel before the edge,my arms outstretched..
I am less without your colours
~*wa do*~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 25 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
~ Am I Not Forgiven ~

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems





~oh small feathers with dancing feet
you flitter here and there,upon the earth
tiny keeper of twigs and leaves,tell me
what serves your soul the best......
so that you may fly with peace in your heart~

~Great Spirit~ why am I not cleansed
I have listened to you,felt your breath of wisdom on my face
Have I not danced beneath many moons,praising all you are
I have nurtured all creatures,loved freely with light heart
Hold me ~Great Spirit~
Know I am of your creation,purely
As the yellow is of the daffodils
And the feathers are of the Eagle
I too pray for your paintbrush to touch me
Make me of the rainbow,butterfly wings...anything..
But the darkness I walk in
~Great Spirit~
I kneel before the edge,my arms outstretched..
I am less without your colours
~*wa do*~




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-09-18 18:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~ Am I Not Forgiven ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:37:30 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful and inspirational...I can not say enough...but you need to forgive yourself...
Hugs
Shari


Re: ~ Am I Not Forgiven ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:34:49 AM AEST
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A beautiful picture and a beautiful spirit..no need to grieve..the great spirit which you believe has already stepped into your heart..there fore now you are a pure spirit... these words coming from a divine soul.
venkat


Re: ~ Am I Not Forgiven ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Walt on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 08:23:19 AM AEST
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I who step before the sun and feed in the meadow, drink of the new spring, kill the fawn, some day will feed the grass and provide shelter for the new fawn. Forgiveness is provided for those not out of ritual, but out of living, to give back what has been lost. Great poem, I liked the story and the message.
Walt


Re: ~ Am I Not Forgiven ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 06:09:23 PM AEST
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He has done his work, how beautiful you are.
Crow




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