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Array ( [sid] => 23453 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Goodbye Without Hello [time] => 2003-09-18 17:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can’t explain what to feel right now
I know I want you but do you want me
Am I willing to take that next step?
The thought of you not being here empties me
Words can’t express the way you make me feel
Ink on a paper can’t show the emotions that run through me
Looking in your eyes takes me on a journey that I don’t want to end
The thought of you not being here empties me
I can’t say I am in love, I can’t say I don’t want to be
But just to hear those words said to me could send me
The thought of you not being here empties me
As I lay here on the pavement, my eyelids feel heavy
Are you on your way? I do not know
Will I make it through this? I do not know
The thought of you not being here empties me
Were still just friends and I start to cry
I feel myself being pulled up to the sky
Why am I being taken from you?
The thought of you not being there empties me
I scream out with my last breath,
“My friends do not regret anything; hold nothing back
Because you never know when your time will come”
The thought of you not being here empties me
I see the wreckage; there you are standing beside me
I promised I would always be here for you
I will be your shadow; I will guide you on the right path
Does the thought of me not being there empty you…
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Goodbye Without Hello

Contributed by hoops32971 on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I can’t explain what to feel right now
I know I want you but do you want me
Am I willing to take that next step?
The thought of you not being here empties me
Words can’t express the way you make me feel
Ink on a paper can’t show the emotions that run through me
Looking in your eyes takes me on a journey that I don’t want to end
The thought of you not being here empties me
I can’t say I am in love, I can’t say I don’t want to be
But just to hear those words said to me could send me
The thought of you not being here empties me
As I lay here on the pavement, my eyelids feel heavy
Are you on your way? I do not know
Will I make it through this? I do not know
The thought of you not being here empties me
Were still just friends and I start to cry
I feel myself being pulled up to the sky
Why am I being taken from you?
The thought of you not being there empties me
I scream out with my last breath,
“My friends do not regret anything; hold nothing back
Because you never know when your time will come”
The thought of you not being here empties me
I see the wreckage; there you are standing beside me
I promised I would always be here for you
I will be your shadow; I will guide you on the right path
Does the thought of me not being there empty you…




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Re: Goodbye Without Hello (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:30:34 PM AEST
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I wish you were never empty..
and felt as lovely as you wish
Lovely poem... just the way of it..
lovely "scream from inside".... aika


Re: Goodbye Without Hello (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:43:37 AM AEST
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oh god, this is so powerful (i really did have to catch my breath)...yet, it's power lay in it's gentleness. and has so moved me. i am sorry you hurt. thank you for sharing. painted_echos




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