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Array ( [sid] => 23417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Every Step I Take [time] => 2003-09-18 05:05:00 [hometext] => Another one about my parents. Enjoy. [bodytext] => You think I'm the one wasting my time
You disapprove of everything I do
Finding mistakes in every step I take
You don't know as much as you think you do

You assume I have no dreams
No desire to do anything
Things aren't always as they seem
Go ahead and think I'm nothing

I'm sick of this charade
But when the anger fades
I might just sit and cry
I wanna ask you why

I would run for miles just to show you I can if you'd see
But you ignore me
You just stare at the TV
And everything you think you know about me is wrong
We can never get along
This is not where you belong

You're all grown up but you're such a child
You're so fake that I can see right through you
I've lost any respect I ever had
I'm so completely disgusted by you

I accept you have no faith
That I'll never be good enough
But I think you're so two-faced
You've abandoned me; fair enough

I would never go back
I don't think I'm offtrack
I wouldn't change a thing
Despite the pain you bring

I swear you're just an empty shell of what you used to be
Staring so vacantly
Killing yourself slowly
I see no life behind the empty face you wear each day
I hate the things you say
You're wasting your life away

I won't waste my breath screaming at you out loud
And I couldn't care less about making you proud
This isn't how it ever should have been
But you pushed me away time and time again
So I guess we all lose a little bit
But you're the ones who were always such hypocrites
So I really can't say it bothers me too much
Me walking out the door is the finishing touch [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Every Step I Take

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



You think I'm the one wasting my time
You disapprove of everything I do
Finding mistakes in every step I take
You don't know as much as you think you do

You assume I have no dreams
No desire to do anything
Things aren't always as they seem
Go ahead and think I'm nothing

I'm sick of this charade
But when the anger fades
I might just sit and cry
I wanna ask you why

I would run for miles just to show you I can if you'd see
But you ignore me
You just stare at the TV
And everything you think you know about me is wrong
We can never get along
This is not where you belong

You're all grown up but you're such a child
You're so fake that I can see right through you
I've lost any respect I ever had
I'm so completely disgusted by you

I accept you have no faith
That I'll never be good enough
But I think you're so two-faced
You've abandoned me; fair enough

I would never go back
I don't think I'm offtrack
I wouldn't change a thing
Despite the pain you bring

I swear you're just an empty shell of what you used to be
Staring so vacantly
Killing yourself slowly
I see no life behind the empty face you wear each day
I hate the things you say
You're wasting your life away

I won't waste my breath screaming at you out loud
And I couldn't care less about making you proud
This isn't how it ever should have been
But you pushed me away time and time again
So I guess we all lose a little bit
But you're the ones who were always such hypocrites
So I really can't say it bothers me too much
Me walking out the door is the finishing touch




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-09-18 05:05:00]
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Re: Every Step I Take (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 07:11:06 AM AEST
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Ouch, Moonlit, sorry things are this way... Nice write, tho
Jenni


Re: Every Step I Take (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Poet on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 09:57:39 AM AEST
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Nice write.. but its really sad to know that at times things turn out this ugly.. hope it turns out for the good.!!!




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