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Array ( [sid] => 23363 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => does it matter [time] => 2003-09-17 12:05:00 [hometext] => never again [bodytext] => no, you didn’t tell me anything, you made your plans, you thought it out
but, not a word to me
no, you don’t owe me anything, it’s your life that you lead, not mine
but then, what should i believe
or does it matter
to you
or me

today you hurt my soul, i can’t chime what you did with who i thought i knew
was everything a lie
today i cry for you, tomorrow i’ll cry too, but not as much and
when did you cry, and for who
or does it matter
to me
or you

and it hurts you know, perhaps you never were my friend, but why then
could be i was a game
and it hurts, you said the only way to prove you would not go
was not to
then you did, and won’t say why
or does it matter
to you
or me
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 328 [topic] => 20 [informant] => painted_echos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )
does it matter

Contributed by painted_echos on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove



no, you didn’t tell me anything, you made your plans, you thought it out
but, not a word to me
no, you don’t owe me anything, it’s your life that you lead, not mine
but then, what should i believe
or does it matter
to you
or me

today you hurt my soul, i can’t chime what you did with who i thought i knew
was everything a lie
today i cry for you, tomorrow i’ll cry too, but not as much and
when did you cry, and for who
or does it matter
to me
or you

and it hurts you know, perhaps you never were my friend, but why then
could be i was a game
and it hurts, you said the only way to prove you would not go
was not to
then you did, and won’t say why
or does it matter
to you
or me




Copyright © painted_echos ... [ 2003-09-17 12:05:00]
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Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:42:48 PM AEST
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aww, i'm sorry.. sounds like you're having a rough time. Great poem, and use of repetition though. Hope you're okay.
x_x_x


Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:53:48 PM AEST
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could be i was a game........
very likely......been there.....i'm sorry.....good write!!!!!


Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:47:51 PM AEST
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Great write ... I love the way you structured the poem with similar words to get your point across ... I especially like the words "tomorrow i'll cry too, but not as much" ... be strong, take care ... Jan


Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 09:46:09 PM AEST
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hope your good, great write, i like the style. Crow


Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:18:37 AM AEST
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yeppers hun..been there and back.Yes we do make it back especially when "today i cry for you, tomorrow i’ll cry too, but not as much"
Stay strong and keep writing
(((hugs)))


Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 10:38:37 PM AEST
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great write - nice rhythm to your work

jeez interent love - not sure I'd be calling it love at all - been there and all I can say is ouch! but live and learn right!!!!

merry


Re: does it matter (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 06:59:40 AM AEST
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Wow nice poem although sad. I don't know about internet love but I'm sure if I ever do, this poem could come in handy...can even describe someone off the net really. I hope everything will be okay. Quote - "today i cry for you, tomorrow i’ll cry too, but not as much and
when did you cry, and for who" - love this line, I feel it exactly. Take Care.
Emma.




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