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A single trickle stroked my burning face.
When his soft lashes blinked a love-filled gaze,
My confusion turned to hurt on my release from the haze.
As he whispered words from a truly devoted heart,
The thumping in my chest began its' fearful start.
Her voice was a melody as she spoke of their eternity,
And my pain became my agony, for I knew he'd found his destiny.
And around their secret tree,
The early Autumn breeze, twirled the crispy leaves,
And I wished that I was her and she was me.

At last he kissed her precious white hand,
And I slowly slid off my one year gold band. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Manda2 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Grace

Contributed by Manda2 on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

When he took the hand of Grace,
A single trickle stroked my burning face.
When his soft lashes blinked a love-filled gaze,
My confusion turned to hurt on my release from the haze.
As he whispered words from a truly devoted heart,
The thumping in my chest began its' fearful start.
Her voice was a melody as she spoke of their eternity,
And my pain became my agony, for I knew he'd found his destiny.
And around their secret tree,
The early Autumn breeze, twirled the crispy leaves,
And I wished that I was her and she was me.

At last he kissed her precious white hand,
And I slowly slid off my one year gold band.

Copyright © Manda2 ... [ 2003-09-16 23:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:03:34 AM AEST
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o` my heart is breaking. very good write I like this. Crow

Re: Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:37:40 AM AEST
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ouch! (((huggers))) This is so very sad.Well written and i love the imagery you projected :)

Re: Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 02:21:36 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...This was so sad..but so well written...I felt your pain..
Jenni

Re: Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:32:18 AM AEST
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Ouch... wow... that's awful. So much pain... I'll send a hug your way.

~ Moonlit

Re: Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:12:26 PM AEST
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I think you captured the feeling of Secret Love wonderfully. I've actually done Secret Love poetry, and I've lived it. I absolutely love this poem! Keep writing, and let's hope this turns out to have a happy ending!

Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess

Re: Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by KiSwaters on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 01:22:34 PM AEST
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I love your imagery, and the detail along with the pace of the poem. It's a sad, sucky situation though. Sorry.

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