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Array ( [sid] => 2332 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Starshine [time] => 2002-08-15 19:58:11 [hometext] => This one starts off as a love poem being told by a hospitalized girl, but through wordplay and twists, it ends having made no points whatsoever. A little silly and nonsensical, but i had to write something cuz of that annoying itch in my poetic little skull that craves writing. Again, some "creative spelling" in this one, so please don't change the words, Mick & co. It's already as it should be. Also, the word "erector" refers to a construction set for children, and nothing more, you dirty-minded people you. [bodytext] => Opium houses
under fire from a mule.
tell me now, what’s a girl to do?
should i just cry like you know who
when you send me your firing squad?
boy, you make this really odd.
and i don’t quite yet understand
just what it means to be a man,
but hands under the table,
who says that i’m not able
to ride the fiercest horses?
let nature take its courses.
here are the crim’nal records
from when that brutus wrecked her
with tools from an erector,
so now i’m anarexor.
and now blasphemous rumours,
I feel like having tumours,
while deep beneath the sewers
the damned shall burn on skewers.
And he is such a romancer
and i’m all ate by cancer
and what i think is rotten,
no literally rotten.
so i’ll take death by chocolate
now baby, don’t you knock it
or i might have a mock fit
and blow up like a rocket.
here, meet the suicide kings.
they’re little men inside me.
and when they bring me slumber,
i can’t feel any dumber.
there’s nothing quite like sinning
‘cept synchronizing swimming
in the ol’ baptismal font.
where the yellow abductees
moan for the quaint essentials
while they all slowly fester,
some moaning more or lester.
that, my friends and detesters,
is the miracle of easter [comments] => 1 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Starshine

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 07:58:11 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Opium houses
under fire from a mule.
tell me now, what’s a girl to do?
should i just cry like you know who
when you send me your firing squad?
boy, you make this really odd.
and i don’t quite yet understand
just what it means to be a man,
but hands under the table,
who says that i’m not able
to ride the fiercest horses?
let nature take its courses.
here are the crim’nal records
from when that brutus wrecked her
with tools from an erector,
so now i’m anarexor.
and now blasphemous rumours,
I feel like having tumours,
while deep beneath the sewers
the damned shall burn on skewers.
And he is such a romancer
and i’m all ate by cancer
and what i think is rotten,
no literally rotten.
so i’ll take death by chocolate
now baby, don’t you knock it
or i might have a mock fit
and blow up like a rocket.
here, meet the suicide kings.
they’re little men inside me.
and when they bring me slumber,
i can’t feel any dumber.
there’s nothing quite like sinning
‘cept synchronizing swimming
in the ol’ baptismal font.
where the yellow abductees
moan for the quaint essentials
while they all slowly fester,
some moaning more or lester.
that, my friends and detesters,
is the miracle of easter




Copyright © Butterat_Zool ... [ 2002-08-15 19:58:11]
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Re: Starshine (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:46:29 AM AEST
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I like it , nice flow to it.
great write.




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