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Array ( [sid] => 23297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => If I Told You [time] => 2003-09-16 08:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I told you I cared,
What would you do?
If I told you I loved you,
Would you love me too?
If I told you I wanted you,
What would you say?
If I told you I needed you,
Would you just turn away?
If I told you my feelings,
How would you react?
If I told you my feelings,
Would they have any impact?
I want to tell you,
Just how I feel.
But how would you know,
If my feelings are real?
You will have to trust me,
You will have to know.
That deep in my heart,
I love you so. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

If I Told You

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I told you I cared,
What would you do?
If I told you I loved you,
Would you love me too?
If I told you I wanted you,
What would you say?
If I told you I needed you,
Would you just turn away?
If I told you my feelings,
How would you react?
If I told you my feelings,
Would they have any impact?
I want to tell you,
Just how I feel.
But how would you know,
If my feelings are real?
You will have to trust me,
You will have to know.
That deep in my heart,
I love you so.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2003-09-16 08:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: If I Told You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:39:54 AM AEST
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lovely
michelle

Re: If I Told You (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:17:31 AM AEST
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simple but sweet and effective! shows you don't always need fancy words to write a good poem! xxx

Re: If I Told You (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:38:08 PM AEST
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hey chick i do like this and i could say that this is good
i think youre telling those people how you feel

Re: If I Told You (User Rating: 1 )
by loserkid on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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Holy hell this is kick a$$ I wish I could give this to me special someone

peace,love,unity
ory
xoxoxo

Re: If I Told You (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 12:25:19 AM AEST
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this is very pretty, simple and a very good read. I enjoyed it. Crow

Re: If I Told You (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:49:22 PM AEST
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Candice Hey Girl. Where Have You Been? I Haven't Seen You Online. Write Me Please

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