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Array ( [sid] => 23243 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Two Hearts [time] => 2003-09-15 08:35:00 [hometext] => Just the same ol Phantom, being a baby, missing my wife.
The Phantom [bodytext] => Two hearts call out, both wishing on the same star,
A thousand miles away, but they understand what the other has to say,
Echos of a hallow kiss, eyes fill with emptyness,
An empty soul, dying without someone to hold,

Hiding my face, wondering if my life is a waste,
Lying all alone, dreams of my wife, dreams of home,
I'm not alive, just going through the motion, fighting back these hurtful emotions,
Losing my grip on reality, tipping the scales of insaneity,

I walk through the cememtry in sreach of where they buried me,
Walking across the lawn, I'm humbled by it peaceful calm,
Swalling my pride, I kneel by my grave side,
I place a single rose as I remove my mask, hopfully I can bury my past,

A heart murdered in cold blood,empty missing my love,
What is life about, I'm digging deep trying to let the pain out,
I can't hide the hurt anymore, loneiness infects me like a sore,
What must I do to turn my gray skies blue,

Can I be saved, it's like I'm trapped in a cave,
It's cold and dark, embracing a dying heart,
Releasing it from it's tomb, protecting it from doom,
Looking to heaven for a sign, being with my wife is a matter of time.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 7 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Two Hearts

Contributed by The_Phantom on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Two hearts call out, both wishing on the same star,
A thousand miles away, but they understand what the other has to say,
Echos of a hallow kiss, eyes fill with emptyness,
An empty soul, dying without someone to hold,

Hiding my face, wondering if my life is a waste,
Lying all alone, dreams of my wife, dreams of home,
I'm not alive, just going through the motion, fighting back these hurtful emotions,
Losing my grip on reality, tipping the scales of insaneity,

I walk through the cememtry in sreach of where they buried me,
Walking across the lawn, I'm humbled by it peaceful calm,
Swalling my pride, I kneel by my grave side,
I place a single rose as I remove my mask, hopfully I can bury my past,

A heart murdered in cold blood,empty missing my love,
What is life about, I'm digging deep trying to let the pain out,
I can't hide the hurt anymore, loneiness infects me like a sore,
What must I do to turn my gray skies blue,

Can I be saved, it's like I'm trapped in a cave,
It's cold and dark, embracing a dying heart,
Releasing it from it's tomb, protecting it from doom,
Looking to heaven for a sign, being with my wife is a matter of time.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




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Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 08:53:21 AM AEST
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ouch!! :( I taste the missing...(((hugs))


Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 09:36:39 AM AEST
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Longing to be with the one you love is no disgrace, this was an excellent write expressing your emptiness with the distance...my thoughts are with you at this hard time
Shari


Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:46:42 AM AEST
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your poem is beautiful, and filled with sadness. i am sorry for your hurt. painted_echos


Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 04:31:34 PM AEST
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Awww Matt...you have expressed your loneliness and need very well here. I wish my arms could reach across the screen..(not that it would help)... Hoping you and Raven are reunited soon again....
Hugs always,
Jenni


Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST
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Your wonds are deep as so is theres,One day this will be a memory to all of you,I hope that day comes soon! God Bless! Christina


Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:41:14 AM AEST
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ahhhh Matt,
I cant even imagine how hard this time apart is for you, this is a beautiful poem touched with much lonely sadness. I feel your pain.
michelle


Re: Two Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:27:18 PM AEST
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the aching is so evident........so profound.....




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