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That b*****d!
Sure, he's charming
Loving, funny, smart
But he has a a daughter
He has his own life
And I mine
This is not the time
The moment isn't right
OH I am mad now!
He told me all I wanted to hear
And everything I didn't
He never lied to make me feel better
He said it straight
He actually cared
Still does, probably always will
For the love of God!
He made me happy.
And I can never be with him
My life to him was a lie
My love for him is completly true
And love won't matter
Cause he hates liars.
Damn him!
I will never hold him
And it's all his fault
Cause he oh he.
He made me love him.
-Candi, the Gurl. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => thegurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

how dare he????

Contributed by thegurl on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I love him and it's all his fault
That b*****d!
Sure, he's charming
Loving, funny, smart
But he has a a daughter
He has his own life
And I mine
This is not the time
The moment isn't right
OH I am mad now!
He told me all I wanted to hear
And everything I didn't
He never lied to make me feel better
He said it straight
He actually cared
Still does, probably always will
For the love of God!
He made me happy.
And I can never be with him
My life to him was a lie
My love for him is completly true
And love won't matter
Cause he hates liars.
Damn him!
I will never hold him
And it's all his fault
Cause he oh he.
He made me love him.
-Candi, the Gurl.

Copyright © thegurl ... [ 2003-09-15 02:35:00]
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Re: how dare he???? (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:50:17 AM AEST
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Awesome write...so emotional, and so truthfully putting it. Well done.

Emma.

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