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________________________ [bodytext] => Hot and cold water perfectly blended
Fill the tub to the rim
Sloshing gently
When I step in
Steam rises like mist
Whispering over my skin
The smell of green tea
Fragrant and inviting
Sinking into the depths
Let go of everything today has been
Sigh of contentment escapes me
Let the heat seep into my bones
Pouring water over my head
Running like hot silk
Dissolving me into itself
Eyes the color of water
Open halfway to watch
Water streaming
O'er my breasts

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Pour It On

Contributed by merry on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Hot and cold water perfectly blended
Fill the tub to the rim
Sloshing gently
When I step in
Steam rises like mist
Whispering over my skin
The smell of green tea
Fragrant and inviting
Sinking into the depths
Let go of everything today has been
Sigh of contentment escapes me
Let the heat seep into my bones
Pouring water over my head
Running like hot silk
Dissolving me into itself
Eyes the color of water
Open halfway to watch
Water streaming
O'er my breasts

Copyright © merry ... [ 2003-09-14 08:05:00]
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Re: Pour It On (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:16:22 AM AEST
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ooh yesss I agree :)I love bubblebaths with candlelight and a nice italian red.A very relaxing write..Thank you

Re: Pour It On (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 10:41:54 AM AEST
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ohhhh yessss!!!!! brilliant!!!...you've brought back memories of not so long ago of those gorgeous jasmine green tea baths at the local sento...so sensual, luxurious and indulgent...hmmmmmm...
ta rosie

Re: Pour It On (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 01:01:13 PM AEST
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Loved the poem! True- nothing heals like a good bath

Great writing!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess

Re: Pour It On (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:12:44 PM AEST
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Wow...I think I need a bath!! This was very good..
Jenni

Re: Pour It On (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:51:07 AM AEST
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this is beautiful..venkat

Re: Pour It On (User Rating: 1 )
by Hooligan785 on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 03:24:29 AM AEST
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I like this poem..It is relaxing

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