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Array ( [sid] => 23191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Something Wrong [time] => 2003-09-14 04:45:00 [hometext] => Is there something wrong with me.
Kane [bodytext] => People dream of a world at peace,
I dream of blood curling screams and folks dying in their sleep,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People dream of finding that perfect love,
I dream of driving drunk, and swimming in blood,
( Is there something wrong with me)

People dream of finding that perfect mate,
I dream of taking a life by releaseing my hate,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People pray they live a full and lovely life,
I don't pray I go in sreach of a sharper knife,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People cry when someone close to them dies,
I cry when a murder gets an injection, or has to fries,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People are scared of what they don't understand,
I am that evil in which you can't stand,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People are scared of death,
I accept it, and look forward to her caress,
( Is there something wrong with me?)

Heart & Soul
Kane [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Something Wrong

Contributed by Kane on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



People dream of a world at peace,
I dream of blood curling screams and folks dying in their sleep,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People dream of finding that perfect love,
I dream of driving drunk, and swimming in blood,
( Is there something wrong with me)

People dream of finding that perfect mate,
I dream of taking a life by releaseing my hate,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People pray they live a full and lovely life,
I don't pray I go in sreach of a sharper knife,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People cry when someone close to them dies,
I cry when a murder gets an injection, or has to fries,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People are scared of what they don't understand,
I am that evil in which you can't stand,
( Is there something wrong with me,)

People are scared of death,
I accept it, and look forward to her caress,
( Is there something wrong with me?)

Heart & Soul
Kane



Copyright © Kane ... [ 2003-09-14 04:45:00]
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Re: Something Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 06:30:06 AM AEST
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Ummm do you want me to really answer that question? Because I think that I would be scared to.


Re: Something Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:23:36 AM AEST
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"People dream of finding that perfect mate,
I dream of taking a life by releaseing my hate,"
Welllll........maybe *shrugs* Sounds like deep depression to me.


Re: Something Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:03:43 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Kane..tho I won't attempt to answer it..lol.. I loved the way this was wriiten.
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Something Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:26:24 PM AEST
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there's somethig wrong with all of us. The things I think deep inside my mind I never let ne one know. Very good write and disturbingly close to my inner thoughts.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Something Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:16:15 PM AEST
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Well people have their own thoughts on everything yours are a little darker than mine would be but thats ok for you,if that works for you! Good dark poem! Christina




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