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Always trapped inside
I hate what I find
Thinking suicide
If life I could rewind
I would step aside
And leave it all behind
With my death's incite

Amused to be abused
But still I am confused
The bloody knife I used
Is what I want to choose
A fire on my fuse
I'm gonna tie a noose
Now I can not lose
A corpse can't feel the blues

Do you see how I feel
I tell you this is real
Its so hard for me to deal
How am I gonna heal
My mind is just not right
My thoughts I have to fight
Just to live another night
Just to live is out of sight

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Tell Me How To Deal

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Confined to my mind
Always trapped inside
I hate what I find
Thinking suicide
If life I could rewind
I would step aside
And leave it all behind
With my death's incite

Amused to be abused
But still I am confused
The bloody knife I used
Is what I want to choose
A fire on my fuse
I'm gonna tie a noose
Now I can not lose
A corpse can't feel the blues

Do you see how I feel
I tell you this is real
Its so hard for me to deal
How am I gonna heal
My mind is just not right
My thoughts I have to fight
Just to live another night
Just to live is out of sight

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-09-13 08:45:00]
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Re: Tell Me How To Deal (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 09:48:03 AM AEST
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"Do you see how I feel
I tell you this is real
Its so hard for me to deal
How am I gonna heal"

by writing it out, by talking it out to those you love until they listen and realize how you feel. I've been there not quite to that extreme but I know how hard it is... hang in there. :) good write.

Re: Tell Me How To Deal (User Rating: 1 )
by squeesh on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:58:45 PM AEST
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thats awesome... ive been there all to many time and it sux just hang in there and keep writing

Re: Tell Me How To Deal (User Rating: 1 )
by Pretty_n_pink on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 04:59:29 PM AEST
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Hey, this is an awesome poem! I feel like this a lot of the time, so if you ever need anybody to talk to just write me. Keep up the great work!

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