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Array ( [sid] => 23147 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Until I die. [time] => 2003-09-13 02:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I never loved
But, when I saw you,
I fall in love with you at the first sight
Before you, my life was simple
Now it changed into an endless dream
In day no rest, until I meet you
In night no sleep, until I see you
You are on my lips
And always on my mind
Where ever I see, I see
Your beautiful face
Which gives the vision of an angel?
Your shinning eyes
Which looks as deep as lake?
Your soft lips
Which are as red & soft as the petals of rose?
What ever I listen, I listen
Your sweet voice
Which dwell in my mind like a nightingale’s song?
Since you came into my life
What was I? What I am now
You have touched me so deep inside
That no one ever touched
I love you & want love
My love! I love you so tenderly & passionately until I die…………….

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 2 [informant] => hot-shot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Until I die.

Contributed by hot-shot on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I never loved
But, when I saw you,
I fall in love with you at the first sight
Before you, my life was simple
Now it changed into an endless dream
In day no rest, until I meet you
In night no sleep, until I see you
You are on my lips
And always on my mind
Where ever I see, I see
Your beautiful face
Which gives the vision of an angel?
Your shinning eyes
Which looks as deep as lake?
Your soft lips
Which are as red & soft as the petals of rose?
What ever I listen, I listen
Your sweet voice
Which dwell in my mind like a nightingale’s song?
Since you came into my life
What was I? What I am now
You have touched me so deep inside
That no one ever touched
I love you & want love
My love! I love you so tenderly & passionately until I die…………….

Copyright Â© hot-shot ... [ 2003-09-13 02:05:00]
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Re: Until I die. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:38:23 AM AEST
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hey man its really heart taking poem ..dud

Re: Until I die. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:06:29 AM AEST
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Hey Man
you have a lot of emotions abt your
loved one :
but why not she know tht thing
please this poem sent to her
i hope she will be yours:
(amt)"general secretory".

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