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Array ( [sid] => 23128 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => In My Secret Chamber [time] => 2003-09-12 17:05:00 [hometext] => A poem about the blues... [bodytext] => Lying here on my bed,
Drowning my spirit here,
Into the deepest silence,
Getting lost, searching my soul,
Starting to feel the blues,
In the air of the night,
As I take a deep breath,
In my dark secret chamber,
Pondering, about my life,
Looking back, at my past...

And as I close my eyes,
I feel the void inside,
The vacuum of nothingness,
Taking hold,
Of my all...
Of my soul...
Of my whole being...

It is like yesterday,
The void was not there,
It is like yesterday,
The missing pieces,
Complete the puzzle...

And alas,
I have not a clue,
I have not a strategy,
I have not a plan,
For my cares to reach out,
To the missing one...

Oh, Lord, can't You see,
I am bearing all this truth,
Bearing all the prayers,
In the deepest depth of my heart,
Longing for some kind of return,
Right here...
Right now...
In my secret chamber...

Show me a way...
I pray...
I plead...
I implore...
Here...
In my secret... chamber... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 32 [informant] => ronald [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

In My Secret Chamber

Contributed by ronald on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Lying here on my bed,
Drowning my spirit here,
Into the deepest silence,
Getting lost, searching my soul,
Starting to feel the blues,
In the air of the night,
As I take a deep breath,
In my dark secret chamber,
Pondering, about my life,
Looking back, at my past...

And as I close my eyes,
I feel the void inside,
The vacuum of nothingness,
Taking hold,
Of my all...
Of my soul...
Of my whole being...

It is like yesterday,
The void was not there,
It is like yesterday,
The missing pieces,
Complete the puzzle...

And alas,
I have not a clue,
I have not a strategy,
I have not a plan,
For my cares to reach out,
To the missing one...

Oh, Lord, can't You see,
I am bearing all this truth,
Bearing all the prayers,
In the deepest depth of my heart,
Longing for some kind of return,
Right here...
Right now...
In my secret chamber...

Show me a way...
I pray...
I plead...
I implore...
Here...
In my secret... chamber...

Copyright © ronald ... [ 2003-09-12 17:05:00]
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Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:10:44 AM AEST
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Yeah, I know the feeling. Sometimes it feels like you've got everything you could ever want, yet there's still something missing spiritually...and you're looking for answers. Well, that's my interpretation of this poem anyway.

I like the way you used simple words, the description is simple to understand and that just makes the poem more meaningful. And I hope the Lord does hear you and answer your prayers.

Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:29:16 AM AEST
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Expressed excellently.

Emma

Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:04:36 AM AEST
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Great poem, I could totally feel what you must have felt. Awesome- keep writing!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess

Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:05:29 AM AEST
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Ahhh the questions and the missing of something vital to ourselves.I sure hope your prayers are answered and if not..dont give up.The best comes to those who wait ;)
Your emotions have flowed nicely here.

Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 01:25:34 AM AEST
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I've felt this way so many times before. Like there was something missing and you really can't understand it. Very well writte.

Thanks for all your comments on my poems, I really appreciate it.

Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by Qohinoor on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:24:57 AM AEST
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O friend, the Lord heard your prayer,
and to ye he sent 3 keys dear
4 Truths and 5 precepts and the Path to you,
The keys that will allow you into the sanctum.

Re: In My Secret Chamber (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:34:06 AM AEST
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An awesome write and prayer.
It's a bit sad but a masterpeice that all can learn from.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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