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[sid] => 23112
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Remembering Nothing (lady of darkness)
[time] => 2003-09-12 09:05:00
[hometext] => This is a poem with an .. well what i would like to consider an "unexpected" twist at the end.. please read it and tell me what you think..
[bodytext] => with darkness consuming me, and silence so perfect, alone and decaying she sits on her grave, i watch as she cries to her long lost true love, remembering my own pain, and how i lost my love, hatred takes over, as she starts to scream aloud, how could he have left her, he made her so proud, slowly i sit on what appears to be a bench, my heart beat so loud, that it pounds in my chest, the lady looks up and starts to turn round, her frail legs unstable, so ready to hit the ground, my breath seems to leave me, i turn rigid like stone, but then i remember, what its like to be alone, strage though it seems, i feel a connection to her, as if her pain & anger were also my hurt, i study her face from a short distance away, but there was something familiar, about the way that she lay, my heart starts to pound, and my body to freeze, as i remember her sadly and fall to my knees, the lady of darkness, the lady i see, the lady i remember, that lady is me............. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => midian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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