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Array ( [sid] => 23105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => In His Eyes [time] => 2003-09-12 07:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => his eyes dark with sorrow
hidden meanings laced across his chest
holding him in this one place
where he cannot escape
the aching heart she makes for him
with her delicate lies woven in webs
intricate patterns of her deceit
branding him with every kiss
until he closes his eyes to her
unable to see her as she is
decides that he can live with it
as long as she spoon feeds him
the love he is so hungry for
she manufactures love for him
with her sly concoctions
soothing potions and pretty words
he wakes up in furious denial
in time to see her eyes closing
so she won’t have to look at him

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In His Eyes

Contributed by Merry on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

his eyes dark with sorrow
hidden meanings laced across his chest
holding him in this one place
where he cannot escape
the aching heart she makes for him
with her delicate lies woven in webs
intricate patterns of her deceit
branding him with every kiss
until he closes his eyes to her
unable to see her as she is
decides that he can live with it
as long as she spoon feeds him
the love he is so hungry for
she manufactures love for him
with her sly concoctions
soothing potions and pretty words
he wakes up in furious denial
in time to see her eyes closing
so she won’t have to look at him

~merry~

Copyright Â© Merry ... [ 2003-09-12 07:05:00]
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Re: In His Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 07:37:37 PM AEST
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a painful write, great work, Crow

Re: In His Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 09:04:55 PM AEST
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very sad, pulls at the heart
Shari

Re: In His Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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I loved this very good and very dark. A beautiful write good job.

Bobo ( Joel)

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