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[sid] => 23065
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => untitled 1
[time] => 2003-09-11 13:05:00
[hometext] => i write some of my poetry on the fly.. so this poem has no real meaning to me.
[bodytext] => Standing upon a distant plateau searching the land high and low A looming shape comes into view Upon a distant horizon awaits a beautiful castle with golden gates It's splendor and intrigue awaiting someone new Terrets high with silver flags yet something in my mind still nags Where have I seen this before? I continue my journey descending the plateau thinking to myself, how far have i to go? Suddenly i see a vision of a person on a floor I pick up my pace and continue with fright is someone hurt? dying? what a dastardly sight! I must hurry if i am to be of any assistance to them Finally my destination is growing in size what fantastic things I see in with my eyes A splendid vision full of Zen Can my mind imagine anything my beautiful? to the maker i am duly grateful That i should be blessed with this display Nearing the walls I see once again a person of whom's life may depend On my assistance today I pass through the gates and continue in disbelief in the center of the court is a tree with silver leaves! Yet to the main castle door do I pace I approach the door and then knock thrice suddenly wanting a warm greeting my thoughts do entice Opening the door a huge room awaits I enter and feel a sense of dread realizing now it is i who am dead I turn to leave and WHAM! I awake..... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 31 [informant] => xavier_dt1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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