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[sid] => 23062
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => The Dead's Revenge
[time] => 2003-09-11 11:35:00
[hometext] => I wrote this while i was tired and i was sick so it's probably not the best, but what the hell, comments are greatly appreciated (hint hint)
[bodytext] => The weeds were tall The sky was gray The fog was thick The night awakes The crows were silent As they watched from the trees The dirt began to shift Shaking the grass and the leaves The tree exploded With a cloud of black crows As a hand reached from the dirt From his shallow grave, he slowly arose He let out a shriek That pierced the silent night air The town people heard the cry and knew He was on his way there The mothers hugged their children Into their basements they ran They peeked out the window with fearful eyes Hoping to survive if they can He breaks through the door Of one little brown house The children cried in the corner Their mother and father cried out loud They tried to protect their children But a few hits and they were gone He towered over the little boys He tore them up, and from his bloody mess went on So when the morning was about to break He left the ravaged town He walked slowly back to his grave And for another day rests underground [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blackfire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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