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Array ( [sid] => 23062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Dead's Revenge [time] => 2003-09-11 11:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this while i was tired and i was sick so it's probably not the best, but what the hell, comments are greatly appreciated (hint hint) [bodytext] => The weeds were tall
The sky was gray
The fog was thick
The night awakes
The crows were silent
As they watched from the trees
The dirt began to shift
Shaking the grass and the leaves
The tree exploded
With a cloud of black crows
As a hand reached from the dirt
From his shallow grave, he slowly arose
He let out a shriek
That pierced the silent night air
The town people heard the cry and knew
He was on his way there
The mothers hugged their children
Into their basements they ran
They peeked out the window with fearful eyes
Hoping to survive if they can
He breaks through the door
Of one little brown house
The children cried in the corner
Their mother and father cried out loud
They tried to protect their children
But a few hits and they were gone
He towered over the little boys
He tore them up, and from his bloody mess went on
So when the morning was about to break
He left the ravaged town
He walked slowly back to his grave
And for another day rests underground [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blackfire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Dead's Revenge

Contributed by blackfire9786 on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The weeds were tall
The sky was gray
The fog was thick
The night awakes
The crows were silent
As they watched from the trees
The dirt began to shift
Shaking the grass and the leaves
The tree exploded
With a cloud of black crows
As a hand reached from the dirt
From his shallow grave, he slowly arose
He let out a shriek
That pierced the silent night air
The town people heard the cry and knew
He was on his way there
The mothers hugged their children
Into their basements they ran
They peeked out the window with fearful eyes
Hoping to survive if they can
He breaks through the door
Of one little brown house
The children cried in the corner
Their mother and father cried out loud
They tried to protect their children
But a few hits and they were gone
He towered over the little boys
He tore them up, and from his bloody mess went on
So when the morning was about to break
He left the ravaged town
He walked slowly back to his grave
And for another day rests underground




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Re: The Dead's Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 12:18:25 PM AEST
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vivid ...
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Re: The Dead's Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by StAiN on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 11:27:53 PM AEST
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that is so awsome




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