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Array ( [sid] => 23011 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => What you did to my heart [time] => 2003-09-10 11:35:00 [hometext] => Some words I was playing around with just for fun.What do you think? I am not sure if one of these words exist but it does now in my Poem. LOL [bodytext] => You took it, you shook it,
you stroked it, you broke it,
That’s what you did to my heart
You really tore it apart.
You strung it you wrung it,
You wowed it, you stole it.
That’s what you did to my heart
You really tore it apart.
You trapped it, you sapped it,
You twisted it, You whipped it,
That’s what you did to my heart,
You really tore it apart.
You hung it, you flung it,
You tripped it, you stripped it,
That’s what you did to my heart,
you really tore it apart,
It’s in bits and pieces now,
to put it back together I don’t know how.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kimmie_mac [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

What you did to my heart

Contributed by Kimmie_mac on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You took it, you shook it,
you stroked it, you broke it,
That’s what you did to my heart
You really tore it apart.
You strung it you wrung it,
You wowed it, you stole it.
That’s what you did to my heart
You really tore it apart.
You trapped it, you sapped it,
You twisted it, You whipped it,
That’s what you did to my heart,
You really tore it apart.
You hung it, you flung it,
You tripped it, you stripped it,
That’s what you did to my heart,
you really tore it apart,
It’s in bits and pieces now,
to put it back together I don’t know how.

Copyright Â© Kimmie_mac ... [ 2003-09-10 11:35:00]
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Re: What you did to my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:11:20 PM AEST
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well said I have been there
shari

Re: What you did to my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 06:30:45 PM AEST
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all of these words work I think. good write Crow

Re: What you did to my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 11:31:41 PM AEST
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Well done on this poem it all works for me!
Good write! Christina

Re: What you did to my heart (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 12:27:35 AM AEST
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ooh, i do so relate...well put, wouldn't change a word. hmm, do you ever wonder that several of us here are writing about the same jerk!! painted_echos

Re: What you did to my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 01:54:35 AM AEST
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Sad but it is well done..words are like arrows shot very fast... good job. venkat

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