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Array ( [sid] => 23010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The night on the beach [time] => 2003-09-10 11:05:00 [hometext] => not my own experience, just my idea....
[bodytext] => We were friends
and hand in hand
we walked on the beach

I had long white dress
you had jeans and T-shirt
both in light blue...

Shoeless in that soft brown sand
our feet wrapped
you put your hand around my waist

I looked at you
under the spell of the full moon
I softly quivered

I stared at sunset
the sun so lovely red
I stopped walking

You sat in the sand
I slipped amongst your legs
and leaned my back on you

The sea softly hissed
as covered the sun in him
and you hugged me around shoulders

It started getting dark
I saw the first star
and you kissed my hair

I could not say "no"
nor "please go on"
cos I strongly shivered

Then you stood against me
and I could see
you took off your T-shirt

You placed it on the sand
softly layed me on that
and lied down so close

The full moon shone
millions stars also
and we looked at each other´s eyes

Your forefinger found my rosy lips
pat them tenderly
and you bent your head towards mine

Long passionate kiss
and entwined bodies
merged with the beach

You passed hand through my hair
so aroused you were
and I heard the sea whispering...

I purred like a kitten
arched a little
and you stopped kissing me

You caressed me softly
and then told me:
"so much I want you"

I gently pushed you back
stood up and
one by one unbuttoned my dress

You sighed with surprise
and I saw your eyes
looking in mine

Then you walked to me
took dress and softly
let it fall on the sand

My hands opened your jeans
while yours helped me
to release from white shining underwear

My bra flew first
then your heavy breath
when undressing bikini

You looked at me
and I slowly
receded into the sea

Your mind amazed
and then I said:
"Come to me".....

Water was warm
a little hissed
when hugged my hot body

I turned and swam
and you followed
the moon showed us where..

You were so fast
and dived
to surface in front of me

You embraced me tight
kissed so wild
I felt mesmerised

So many cuddly touches
hands exploring bodies
the sea so quiet, only our sighs

Passionately kissing my body under water
I felt so strong shiver
and the sea rippled

The wave swung me forward the beach
I stood on the bottom - silence around me
I could not see you, I lost you ...????

Staring on the surface
one minute seemed to be ten
when I heard splash so close

I felt your fingers on my knees
slowly moving up and your lips
on my belly - I moaned..

Water came up to my shoulders
and I put my hands under water
and took your head to take you out

As you surfaced
I slowly wrapped
my legs around you

I felt you in me
our love making
took a long long time

Unbridled and with fantasy
our bodies in the sea
passion and ecstasy

Fast and slowly
purrs and sighs
looks in the eyes

Full moon and the stars
passionate night
and only You and I.........












[comments] => 1 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The night on the beach

Contributed by Aika on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



We were friends
and hand in hand
we walked on the beach

I had long white dress
you had jeans and T-shirt
both in light blue...

Shoeless in that soft brown sand
our feet wrapped
you put your hand around my waist

I looked at you
under the spell of the full moon
I softly quivered

I stared at sunset
the sun so lovely red
I stopped walking

You sat in the sand
I slipped amongst your legs
and leaned my back on you

The sea softly hissed
as covered the sun in him
and you hugged me around shoulders

It started getting dark
I saw the first star
and you kissed my hair

I could not say "no"
nor "please go on"
cos I strongly shivered

Then you stood against me
and I could see
you took off your T-shirt

You placed it on the sand
softly layed me on that
and lied down so close

The full moon shone
millions stars also
and we looked at each other´s eyes

Your forefinger found my rosy lips
pat them tenderly
and you bent your head towards mine

Long passionate kiss
and entwined bodies
merged with the beach

You passed hand through my hair
so aroused you were
and I heard the sea whispering...

I purred like a kitten
arched a little
and you stopped kissing me

You caressed me softly
and then told me:
"so much I want you"

I gently pushed you back
stood up and
one by one unbuttoned my dress

You sighed with surprise
and I saw your eyes
looking in mine

Then you walked to me
took dress and softly
let it fall on the sand

My hands opened your jeans
while yours helped me
to release from white shining underwear

My bra flew first
then your heavy breath
when undressing bikini

You looked at me
and I slowly
receded into the sea

Your mind amazed
and then I said:
"Come to me".....

Water was warm
a little hissed
when hugged my hot body

I turned and swam
and you followed
the moon showed us where..

You were so fast
and dived
to surface in front of me

You embraced me tight
kissed so wild
I felt mesmerised

So many cuddly touches
hands exploring bodies
the sea so quiet, only our sighs

Passionately kissing my body under water
I felt so strong shiver
and the sea rippled

The wave swung me forward the beach
I stood on the bottom - silence around me
I could not see you, I lost you ...????

Staring on the surface
one minute seemed to be ten
when I heard splash so close

I felt your fingers on my knees
slowly moving up and your lips
on my belly - I moaned..

Water came up to my shoulders
and I put my hands under water
and took your head to take you out

As you surfaced
I slowly wrapped
my legs around you

I felt you in me
our love making
took a long long time

Unbridled and with fantasy
our bodies in the sea
passion and ecstasy

Fast and slowly
purrs and sighs
looks in the eyes

Full moon and the stars
passionate night
and only You and I.........
















Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-09-10 11:05:00]
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Re: The night on the beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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Your passion shines through here Aika.You have written so vividly with this, it sends a tingle down my spine just reading it.




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