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Array ( [sid] => 22997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Carry You! [time] => 2003-09-10 04:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this a while ago for my mom when she got real sick! I rewrote it for a friend who needed me! [bodytext] => I know theres times you feel like giving up,
feel like theres no where to turn,
but just remember I'm there for for you,
I wont let your dreams burn,
I know theres times your legs feel weak,
and you feel you cant get through,
just when you think youre going to fall,
I will pick you up,and carry you,
when the sun goes down,& darkness falls,
and the stars are all to light your way,
I will lead you to the path I know,
I wont leave you astray,
If ever theres a moment of doubt,
dont let your troubles get you down,
theres a friend like me to help ,
I will be your laughing clown,
at times in life the path is long,
and the road is just too wide,
just remember I'll be there,
walking with you,side by side,
I will be your strength when you need it,
so if you feel like you should fall,
I will be there to carry you,
just remember to give me a call!


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Carry You!

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



I know theres times you feel like giving up,
feel like theres no where to turn,
but just remember I'm there for for you,
I wont let your dreams burn,
I know theres times your legs feel weak,
and you feel you cant get through,
just when you think youre going to fall,
I will pick you up,and carry you,
when the sun goes down,& darkness falls,
and the stars are all to light your way,
I will lead you to the path I know,
I wont leave you astray,
If ever theres a moment of doubt,
dont let your troubles get you down,
theres a friend like me to help ,
I will be your laughing clown,
at times in life the path is long,
and the road is just too wide,
just remember I'll be there,
walking with you,side by side,
I will be your strength when you need it,
so if you feel like you should fall,
I will be there to carry you,
just remember to give me a call!






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Re: Carry You! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:38:48 AM AEST
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This is fabulous.I love it. Kimmie_mac


Re: Carry You! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:58:48 AM AEST
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How very loving, how very kind, how very self-sacrificing....no one could ever find...a daughter or person like you is very rare...
I think this poem is too! For how many people do you know today that would do that for you? Very Very few!
I loved the goodness your poem projected
My heart was moved, and totally affected!
Wonderfully moving, sincerely written
Always enjoy yours.....they are out of sight!
lovingcritters
Connie Sue


Re: Carry You! (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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wow!! so beautiful, made me cry, but in a good way....you are a magnificent woman, so caring and strong...thank you for sharing your heart here...
hugs
kara


Re: Carry You! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:23:38 AM AEST
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Christina this is beautiful. Your a kind dear hearted person
michelle


Re: Carry You! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:30:58 AM AEST
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great write
Shari


Re: Carry You! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ivy on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:15:13 PM AEST
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A very nice write. Ivy




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