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Array ( [sid] => 22985 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cold Fury [time] => 2003-09-09 23:05:00 [hometext] => a poem on abuse.... [bodytext] => i lick my wounds and wonder
was it black magic or something trajic
that made you hurt me so-
made you destroy this peaceful child?
was it your dark pagan heart
or your bipolar mind
that left me behind
when i needed you most?
cold and lonely every night
when you came home
my throat was held tight
and you laughed at me
while i cried through the night
in the morning, shivering, asking for a hug
so i can pretend this is love
as if my heart had enough
to leave us both fulfilled
now i know better
my heart can heal nothing
it can only leave me empty
while you are greedily feeding on a new soul...
was it a dark magic ritual
or a psychotic act of hate?
doesn't really matter
because my blood raging with fury
is all i have left... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => karoody [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Cold Fury

Contributed by karoody on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i lick my wounds and wonder
was it black magic or something trajic
that made you hurt me so-
made you destroy this peaceful child?
was it your dark pagan heart
or your bipolar mind
that left me behind
when i needed you most?
cold and lonely every night
when you came home
my throat was held tight
and you laughed at me
while i cried through the night
in the morning, shivering, asking for a hug
so i can pretend this is love
as if my heart had enough
to leave us both fulfilled
now i know better
my heart can heal nothing
it can only leave me empty
while you are greedily feeding on a new soul...
was it a dark magic ritual
or a psychotic act of hate?
doesn't really matter
because my blood raging with fury
is all i have left...

Copyright © karoody ... [ 2003-09-09 23:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cold Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 12:04:41 AM AEST
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Good poem yet so sad. Hope things are better now. Nicely writen.

Re: Cold Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:47:12 AM AEST
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Oh, dear, this is very intense..a powerful write..welldone. venkat

Re: Cold Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:50:59 AM AEST
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Great, but tragic poem.So much hatred and pain placed in every word. I truly hope that peace and serenity finds its way into your heart and soul. Wondreful work. Keep writing.

Re: Cold Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 03:26:01 PM AEST
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This really sad... This is so heartbreaking but a wonderful write!! I loved this one Kara!!

Re: Cold Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:44:09 PM AEST
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this was goood yet very sad
or your bipolar mind
I don't like that line though since i am bipolar, but the rest was good and very haunting.

Joel (Bobo)

Re: Cold Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 09:32:44 AM AEST
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I haven't experienced abuse, well not from someone I love and care for anyhow, but I have grown up seeing my mum emotionally abused, and I know that it is an awful thing for anyone to go through, physical or emotional. Anyhow, a great write, so sad and powerful

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