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takes my heart from a small giggle
to tears she cries.

All the love I could have,
is here in these words I write.

My child, the woman I see,
lifes promised happiness
has graced me with you.

Love is eternal, if we were to part,
I will always be with you.

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The Promise

Contributed by crow on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

This beautiful light in my life,
takes my heart from a small giggle
to tears she cries.

All the love I could have,
is here in these words I write.

My child, the woman I see,
lifes promised happiness
has graced me with you.

Love is eternal, if we were to part,
I will always be with you.

A promise to my child.......Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-09-09 06:05:00]
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Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:51:40 AM AEST
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True words of a father's love, well done
Shari

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 08:38:52 AM AEST
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beautiful words from a caring father to his most beautiful daughter
michelle

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 09:36:46 AM AEST
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I have this problem when I see
A poem as lovely as a tree,
A tear drop slides on down my cheek
A parents love I always seek.

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 10:55:39 AM AEST
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Dear Crow,
I think Norm has said it all
Good parents with lots of love can keep children from a great fall....
And like Humpty Dumpty...
Sometimes we can't find their pieces at all!
What a wonderful father you are.
What a touching poem.
lovingcritters

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:05:29 AM AEST
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I understand your words of promise. A parents love for a child is never ending, always forgiving, always there, A parents love is ALWAYS. Good Poem. Kimmie_mac

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:46:15 AM AEST
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you are a true father.....cherish that gift!!!

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:01:35 PM AEST
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With such a loving father
One shouldn't even bother
To worry about your daughter's deeds
From you she has all the love she needs
We're now sure in Life she will succeed.

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:59:33 PM AEST
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Awwwww..... Such beauty for such beauty in your life. What a great dad to make this loving promise!!! {{{{{crow}}}}}
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:50:19 AM AEST
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I dont believe in making promises for then they cannot be broken but I know with my all that you are not ofsuch capabilities.You are a wonderful caring person and I am sure an even better father.Im sure your daughter realises the depth of your love for her.You are truly remarkable..in many ways.

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