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Array ( [sid] => 22944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Best Friends [time] => 2003-09-09 02:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You take me to the 9th cloud when iam down,
having a little frown,
when my toast is a bit more brown,
you make me feel as though i have a crown.

You sing to me when i cry,
try very hard to make me smile,
you are there for me when I need
with a chocolate in hand to make things sweet.

I see myself happiest of the lot,
and very fortunate to have tied this friendship knot.
A knot that is very precious to me,
that people can rarely see.

This friendship is here to stay,
which i cherish in a big big way.
Loads of things i want to say,
but there are not enough words to sum it up in anyway.

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Best Friends

Contributed by Ivy on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

You take me to the 9th cloud when iam down,
having a little frown,
when my toast is a bit more brown,
you make me feel as though i have a crown.

You sing to me when i cry,
try very hard to make me smile,
you are there for me when I need
with a chocolate in hand to make things sweet.

I see myself happiest of the lot,
and very fortunate to have tied this friendship knot.
A knot that is very precious to me,
that people can rarely see.

This friendship is here to stay,
which i cherish in a big big way.
Loads of things i want to say,
but there are not enough words to sum it up in anyway.

Copyright © Ivy ... [ 2003-09-09 02:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Best Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by AppleScruffs on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:44:37 AM AEST
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i really like what you have to say in this poem. i think that it is something that a lot of people don't say to their friends and sometimes it needs to be said. i would like to give you a small suggestion though.... stick to a rhyme scheme. you have a great piece but i noticed you break the pattern in the third verse. rhyming is difficult and i applaud you for tackling it.... beautiful work!

Re: Best Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Damien on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 08:32:33 AM AEST
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This is one of the best poems that I have read, I have one friend like that with me and I know it feels great to have such friends , keep up the good work- Danny :))

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