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Array ( [sid] => 22938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => One night [time] => 2003-09-08 23:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When we first met
And you looked so straight
You stretchedyour hands
And softly caressed my hair
So softly I shivered
You came closer to me
and kissed my lips.
Then your hands
Slipped down on my waists
And you pressed me to thee
So lovely and I could feel
My arms around your neck
I felt quiver in my back
You looked in my eyes
And our passion rised
We started to kiss softly
And so slowly
Then you were more passionate
And our kissing immense
Our tongues dancing
In excitement
You stopped kissing and bent
Took me in your arms and went
Layed me in grass like it was a bed
You put me there so gently
And lied to me
And our indomitable arousal
Caused, that in a while
Our bodies naked became one
Our hands slipping up and down
Hundreds of touches
Bodies covered with kisses
Shivers in an every cell
Sighs and purrs
High pressure and suddenly
Came sweet ecstasy
Huge energy mass
From us released and
Both of us so satisfied

In this sweet night that long
You did not talk
Only you said:
Darling I am leaving
Never come back

You do not know it
But I appreciate
It was just you
My very first...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
One night

Contributed by Aika on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



When we first met
And you looked so straight
You stretchedyour hands
And softly caressed my hair
So softly I shivered
You came closer to me
and kissed my lips.
Then your hands
Slipped down on my waists
And you pressed me to thee
So lovely and I could feel
My arms around your neck
I felt quiver in my back
You looked in my eyes
And our passion rised
We started to kiss softly
And so slowly
Then you were more passionate
And our kissing immense
Our tongues dancing
In excitement
You stopped kissing and bent
Took me in your arms and went
Layed me in grass like it was a bed
You put me there so gently
And lied to me
And our indomitable arousal
Caused, that in a while
Our bodies naked became one
Our hands slipping up and down
Hundreds of touches
Bodies covered with kisses
Shivers in an every cell
Sighs and purrs
High pressure and suddenly
Came sweet ecstasy
Huge energy mass
From us released and
Both of us so satisfied

In this sweet night that long
You did not talk
Only you said:
Darling I am leaving
Never come back

You do not know it
But I appreciate
It was just you
My very first...





Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-09-08 23:35:00]
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Re: One night (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:42:31 AM AEST
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Oh Aika, how very romantic and tender, and I'm so sorry he left! What a fool!
Connie


Re: One night (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 01:35:44 AM AEST
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WOW this is good and I am sorry he left you. I hate guys when they do that.


Re: One night (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 09:44:57 AM AEST
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The way I see it, you had your fun
The gent said, "bye", when he was done.
When both of you did all this stuff
one of you had to yell, "Enough!"




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