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Array ( [sid] => 22930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => NEVER, NEVER, LAND [time] => 2003-09-08 19:05:00 [hometext] => Written 6/21/91
We all seek escapes at times so mine is called never, never, land [bodytext] => As life unfolds before my eyes
a secret hidden deep inside.
The little girl in here says,
No that's not far away.
It can't hang around to haunt.
Never, never land what we want.

A place to be free from spooks!
Never before has there been
such an open book.
A memory, thought or wrong deed
can't enter inside to torture me.
Never, never land an
eternal home to enter
it's gates never to roam.

Till the day when heartaches cease
troubles keep me on my knees.
No matter how bleak it
may seem nor how far
we've been in between.
This vision will continue in my soul
to never, never land
someday I'll go.

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NEVER, NEVER, LAND

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

As life unfolds before my eyes
a secret hidden deep inside.
The little girl in here says,
No that's not far away.
It can't hang around to haunt.
Never, never land what we want.

A place to be free from spooks!
Never before has there been
such an open book.
A memory, thought or wrong deed
can't enter inside to torture me.
Never, never land an
eternal home to enter
it's gates never to roam.

Till the day when heartaches cease
troubles keep me on my knees.
No matter how bleak it
may seem nor how far
we've been in between.
This vision will continue in my soul
to never, never land
someday I'll go.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2003-09-08 19:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 11:31:41 PM AEST
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Emy, I LOVE this..... I think this is my fav of yours now... it's so beautiful and dreamy...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:51:43 AM AEST
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Dear Little emystar....I wrote a poem about my Never Ever land, and will post it one day so you can come away with me! I just loved your Never Never Land, such a safe place to be!
Your poem was lovely, emystar.....twinkle twinkle a beautiful poet you are!
lovingcritters
Connie

Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 08:46:46 AM AEST
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Girls u 2 sure know how 2 make this star shine. twink, twink, twinkle don't u know?
Luv ya'll gonna go.
PEACE, JOY, LUV, THANKS,
emy

Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:06:46 PM AEST
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Emystar,
Great poem! I love the Never never land idea. All in all, I'd say a 10.

;)
Jelly belly

Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:07:30 AM AEST
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Well written..A good work....venkat

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