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Array ( [sid] => 22922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-09-08 13:45:00 [hometext] => This here is a second poem I have written towards my brother. Once again I struggled in writing this as the poem doesn't seem to flow evenly. [bodytext] => I had to run and I don't know why
So to face these tears that I've tried to hide

You left me here to stand so still
Taking all of my strength and all of my will

And now I lie so dying underneat
And yet then you will never know these dreams

You took my pride and threw it away
And you watched as I cride and regretted each day

But now as I leave you and get out of control
Left with despairing thoughts that leave me so cold

You left me to die and awake with the pain
Alone with the night and the words that remain

Only your voices are the ones that won't leave
Choking my soul so that it could no longer breathe

And now you left me with these scars that I so hold
And undying words that will never let go

But somehow I still love you and yet I may never know why
Forgiving words that I so give to the one who makes me cry

I hope you never go through this as what you've done to me
But somehow I must pass it on so one day you could see

And now I lie here with the bleeding sunsets
Your spinning words that I can't seem to forget

Please don't leave me here in this place
Theres so much in this world that I can't face

I think of you to stay alive
And I think of you and I can't survive

And there's so many words that I wish I could send
Cause I never want to face you again

And all these painful memories that you made me recall
They all come back to me as you wait for me to fall

My elusive sun so does fade away with your untimely words
And I though I had known everything but now I'm so unsure [comments] => 1 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 39 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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Contributed by SpreadYourWings on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



I had to run and I don't know why
So to face these tears that I've tried to hide

You left me here to stand so still
Taking all of my strength and all of my will

And now I lie so dying underneat
And yet then you will never know these dreams

You took my pride and threw it away
And you watched as I cride and regretted each day

But now as I leave you and get out of control
Left with despairing thoughts that leave me so cold

You left me to die and awake with the pain
Alone with the night and the words that remain

Only your voices are the ones that won't leave
Choking my soul so that it could no longer breathe

And now you left me with these scars that I so hold
And undying words that will never let go

But somehow I still love you and yet I may never know why
Forgiving words that I so give to the one who makes me cry

I hope you never go through this as what you've done to me
But somehow I must pass it on so one day you could see

And now I lie here with the bleeding sunsets
Your spinning words that I can't seem to forget

Please don't leave me here in this place
Theres so much in this world that I can't face

I think of you to stay alive
And I think of you and I can't survive

And there's so many words that I wish I could send
Cause I never want to face you again

And all these painful memories that you made me recall
They all come back to me as you wait for me to fall

My elusive sun so does fade away with your untimely words
And I though I had known everything but now I'm so unsure




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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:27:54 PM AEST
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I absolutely love it. Your words were just so (lack of better words-) poetic. It was such a contradicting topic. Just amazing.
Keep writing,
Jelly Belly Princess




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