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Array ( [sid] => 22921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Maybe [time] => 2003-09-08 13:05:00 [hometext] => Haven't been on here for awhile.... read the poem and you'll get what it's about.... one of my better ones I do believe.... let me know what ya think! [bodytext] => Maybe I’m young
Maybe you’re too old
Maybe one day
We’ll become cold

Maybe you love me
Maybe you don’t
Maybe I’ll lose you
Hopefully I won’t

Maybe you’re lying
Maybe you’re astute
Maybe you’re stupid
But damn you sure are cute

Maybe we’ll never
Maybe one day
Maybe you’ll run
But I’m gonna stay

Maybe I’m crazy
Maybe you’re untrue
Maybe you don’t realize
I’m in love with you

Maybe it’s forever
Maybe you’ll be mine
But until I find the answers
Maybe will be fine
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ktbugg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Maybe

Contributed by ktbugg on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Maybe I’m young
Maybe you’re too old
Maybe one day
We’ll become cold

Maybe you love me
Maybe you don’t
Maybe I’ll lose you
Hopefully I won’t

Maybe you’re lying
Maybe you’re astute
Maybe you’re stupid
But damn you sure are cute

Maybe we’ll never
Maybe one day
Maybe you’ll run
But I’m gonna stay

Maybe I’m crazy
Maybe you’re untrue
Maybe you don’t realize
I’m in love with you

Maybe it’s forever
Maybe you’ll be mine
But until I find the answers
Maybe will be fine

Copyright Â© ktbugg ... [ 2003-09-08 13:05:00]
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Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 02:01:13 PM AEST
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hmm I liked this the repetition really added to it. I loved the last line in the 3rd stanza. Hope to see more stuff from you soon.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:46:40 PM AEST
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ktbugg,
I'm gonna have to agree with Bobo about that third stanza, last line. I just laughed in my head at that. And that last line in the fourth really hit me hard. Do ya mind if I take a quote from it? I'm kinda, sort of giving anonymous letters to someone (who?- see my poem "Two Pools"). That would be awesome if I could quote maybe a stanza or two. Strictly speaking, I'd give you the credit. But that just put into words exactly what I wanted to tell him. Write me back care of comments on "Two Pools"

gtt- LOVED the poem,
Jellybellyprincess

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