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I can feel my heart crying,
Every night and day.
My heart wants you near me,
Not so far away.

It flutters like a butterfly,
Wheneven I think of you.
Then I feel the teardrops,
Like tiny drops of dew.

Please stop crying, my dear heart.
There's nothing we can do.
We have to pretend everything's fine,
And try to see this thru.

Maybe someday an angel,
From heaven up above,
Will tap us on the shoulder,
And sanctify our love.

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I FEEL MY HEART CRYING

Contributed by Del on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I can feel my heart crying,
Every night and day.
My heart wants you near me,
Not so far away.

It flutters like a butterfly,
Wheneven I think of you.
Then I feel the teardrops,
Like tiny drops of dew.

Please stop crying, my dear heart.
There's nothing we can do.
We have to pretend everything's fine,
And try to see this thru.

Maybe someday an angel,
From heaven up above,
Will tap us on the shoulder,
And sanctify our love.

Copyright © Del ... [ 2003-09-07 19:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:36:19 PM AEST
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This was so poetically beautiful it put tears in my eyes.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:40:10 PM AEST
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WOW!!...wow that was great it really did put tears in my eyes it just flowed great job keep writing

Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:52:30 PM AEST
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Oh Del..this is so beautul..and sad.. but hold on to hope....that angel may be closer than you know..
Jenni

Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:19:57 PM AEST
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Beodra! (Beautiful)

Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:38:03 PM AEST
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I love it. It's the situation that I find myself in right now. My heart is torn to peices by seperation, yet being mended at the same time by the sweet memory, and the hope that I will be with my love again.
This is an awesome poem. Never cease to write.
David

Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 07:48:32 PM AEST
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The poetry gets better and better!

Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:27:38 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery

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