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Her long black hair is lying on someone else’s bed,
Her brown eyes are looking into another lovers instead.
She’s loving him like she used to love me,
But I lost her when I didn’t fulfill her needs.

(Chorus)I lost it all when I lost my brown-eyed girl,
She was my life she was my world.
She was the one who made me a man.
When will this broken heart ever mend?
(Chorus)
My whole world came crashing in,
With her gone it will never be right again.
She was the half that made me whole,
She’s taken my heart and I’ve lost my soul.

(Chorus)
She’s found someone else to hold her.
I wasn’t there when she needed a shoulder,
She’s now gone from my life,
She is now another man’s wife.
(Chorus)
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I Lost It All

Contributed by Kimmie_mac on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I Lost It All

Her long black hair is lying on someone else’s bed,
Her brown eyes are looking into another lovers instead.
She’s loving him like she used to love me,
But I lost her when I didn’t fulfill her needs.

(Chorus)I lost it all when I lost my brown-eyed girl,
She was my life she was my world.
She was the one who made me a man.
When will this broken heart ever mend?
(Chorus)
My whole world came crashing in,
With her gone it will never be right again.
She was the half that made me whole,
She’s taken my heart and I’ve lost my soul.

(Chorus)
She’s found someone else to hold her.
I wasn’t there when she needed a shoulder,
She’s now gone from my life,
She is now another man’s wife.
(Chorus)

Copyright Â© Kimmie_mac ... [ 2003-09-07 09:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:06:14 AM AEST
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its definitely a song and quite a good one as songs go, as good as any you might hear on the radio ayways,
paul

Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:16:10 PM AEST
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Kimmie, this is beautiful... I can actually imagine a tune in my head... Go for it!!!!
Jenni

Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:37:36 PM AEST
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sounds country to me! good work. Crow

Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:57:59 PM AEST
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good...have you put it to music? agree with crow, feeling country

Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:30:50 PM AEST
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Definitely a song....a good but oh so sad one. I'll agree with Crow too, it does sound like a country. Well done!
Saira

Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 07:50:36 PM AEST
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This would make a great song - maybe the blues. Can you write the music for it? Could be a gold record.

Re: I Lost It All (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:42:51 PM AEST
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No I can't write the music WISH I could. I often wondered what it would sound like.
Thanks, Kimmie_mac

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