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Array ( [sid] => 22852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Never Thought [time] => 2003-09-06 23:35:00 [hometext] => I've been working on this for quite some time now, Please let me know what you think. There will be an addition to this if you like it [bodytext] => This is not what I expected
Never thought I'd be rejected
Even though I've been neglected
My whole life
This is not what I intended
Never thought I'd be offended
By a man that I've resented
My whole life
This is not what I detested
Never thought I'd be infested
By these pains that I've invested
In my life
This is not what I persisted
Never thought I'd be protested
For the words that I presented
In my life
This is not what I imagined
Never thought I'd be abandoned
But this man has left me stranded
For my life
This is not how I had planned it
Never thought I understanded
Now I know that God has damned it
For my life
This is not what I have wanted
Never thought I'd be confronted
By a God that I have hunted
My whole life
This is not what I insisted
Never thought He'd be persistant
On my soul after He had missed it
My whole life
This is not what I invisioned
Never thought He'd be proficient
After all He never listened
In my life
This is not my last rendition
Never thought I'd get attention
By a God I never mention
In my life
This is not my last ambition
Never thought of my condition
Being lost along this mission
For my life
This is not what I've been wishing
Never thought of what I'm missing
In my ignorance I'm blissing
For my life
This is not at all acception
Never thought of this dejection
How I live in contradiction
My whole life
This is not all redemption
Never thought of the repression
Of this suicide obssesion
My whole life
This is not a good decision
Never thought of this description
How we rise to our desention
In our lives [comments] => 5 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Never Thought

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



This is not what I expected
Never thought I'd be rejected
Even though I've been neglected
My whole life
This is not what I intended
Never thought I'd be offended
By a man that I've resented
My whole life
This is not what I detested
Never thought I'd be infested
By these pains that I've invested
In my life
This is not what I persisted
Never thought I'd be protested
For the words that I presented
In my life
This is not what I imagined
Never thought I'd be abandoned
But this man has left me stranded
For my life
This is not how I had planned it
Never thought I understanded
Now I know that God has damned it
For my life
This is not what I have wanted
Never thought I'd be confronted
By a God that I have hunted
My whole life
This is not what I insisted
Never thought He'd be persistant
On my soul after He had missed it
My whole life
This is not what I invisioned
Never thought He'd be proficient
After all He never listened
In my life
This is not my last rendition
Never thought I'd get attention
By a God I never mention
In my life
This is not my last ambition
Never thought of my condition
Being lost along this mission
For my life
This is not what I've been wishing
Never thought of what I'm missing
In my ignorance I'm blissing
For my life
This is not at all acception
Never thought of this dejection
How I live in contradiction
My whole life
This is not all redemption
Never thought of the repression
Of this suicide obssesion
My whole life
This is not a good decision
Never thought of this description
How we rise to our desention
In our lives




Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-09-06 23:35:00]
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Re: Never Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:50:12 AM AEST
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Wow, I can tell this was time consuming to write. Very well done! Enjoyed.

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~


Re: Never Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:24:55 AM AEST
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Very interesting, creative write here!
Like rage, I think this one took some thought.
Very deep but that's a good thing!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy


Re: Never Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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Understanded, huh? lol... way to rhyme. This was fun to read. Great job.

~ Moonlit


Re: Never Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:28:44 PM AEST
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I loved the structure in this. I thought you had left but it appears you have not which is good and by all means write a part II. Keep it up.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Never Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:01:16 PM AEST
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this is good!!! a lot of thought process....be it in your noggin or the paper........but great all the same....bring on the second phase




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