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Array ( [sid] => 22849 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A day with nature [time] => 2003-09-06 22:05:00 [hometext] => this was written on a beautiful sunny day, too bad I had to spend that day at school... [bodytext] => As I walk through these green filled fields
No sounds of motors, no sight of wheels
The scene is so peaceful and calm
As I place a blue rose in the centre of my palm

The sky so blue as it stretches wide
The sound of the ocean as it reaches low tide
So quiet in this scene of serenity
How I wish it could stay like this for eternity

A soft ocean breeze, starts coming through
Sitting in the green fields, looking down at the ocean so blue
The golden sun brings warmth to the day
The joy fills inside me as I watch nature's way

Why couldn't it always, be perfect like this
Why can't it last, seems like a short bliss
Its not the end though, as it fading light
We'll get to see stars, coming out of the night [comments] => 5 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 27 [informant] => Pompous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
A day with nature

Contributed by Pompous on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



As I walk through these green filled fields
No sounds of motors, no sight of wheels
The scene is so peaceful and calm
As I place a blue rose in the centre of my palm

The sky so blue as it stretches wide
The sound of the ocean as it reaches low tide
So quiet in this scene of serenity
How I wish it could stay like this for eternity

A soft ocean breeze, starts coming through
Sitting in the green fields, looking down at the ocean so blue
The golden sun brings warmth to the day
The joy fills inside me as I watch nature's way

Why couldn't it always, be perfect like this
Why can't it last, seems like a short bliss
Its not the end though, as it fading light
We'll get to see stars, coming out of the night




Copyright © Pompous ... [ 2003-09-06 22:05:00]
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Re: A day with nature (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:11:18 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Pompous. This is absolutely beautiful!! It left me with such a peaceful feeling. Hope to see lots more of your work.
Jenni


Re: A day with nature (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:53:50 AM AEST
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Fantabulas!
Your body was in school but your heart was in heaven!
In this is see your very positive attitude-n-that's a good thang!
PEACE, JOY, LUV OF NATURE,
emy


Re: A day with nature (User Rating: 1 )
by Ivy on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:51:28 AM AEST
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Nice write. Ivy


Re: A day with nature (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:57:28 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhhh yesss I love nature!! You may have been in school physically but your soul and senses were on the breeze.Wonderful feelings you have given me ..ta ;)


Re: A day with nature (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:55:31 AM AEST
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peaceful, serene, absolutely beautiful... poignant and descriptive... well done.

Lindsey

PS. I give you an A+...




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