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Array ( [sid] => 22843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Who could love you more than I? [time] => 2003-09-06 19:05:00 [hometext] => Please POST COMMENTS!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE i would really appreciate it. this is the first poem ive written in a long time [bodytext] => Who could love you more than i?

For i would know your beauty even if i were blind

But in my heart you are so much more than what my eyes see

You are the woman who completes the man in me

Who am I apart from you- apart from your love?

Nothing will suffice. No amount is enough.

All things which surround you fade away

You are the only presence. the shining light that fills my days

It is only you who can be the one at my side

I must let you know. Even though i have no greater fear than being denied

For I see you in my dreams I feel you in my heart

I dont know how to live life without you. I wouldn't know where to start

I am so happy just to know who you are

For some search distant lands near and far

To find that one person to whom they belong

Well i have found you. I know your the one. There is no need to search on

And even if you do not love me in return

I will always remember you as my love and it will only be you for which i yearn

Even if it is your love that i lack

I will love you no matter what. For i can only love without holding back.

I have searched the stars and looked to the heavens hoping that you will not turn away from me

Without you who would i be?

What would i do? Where would i go?

Whatever fate has for me i will accept. But i love you... This is what i know!







[comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => philly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Who could love you more than I?

Contributed by philly on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Who could love you more than i?

For i would know your beauty even if i were blind

But in my heart you are so much more than what my eyes see

You are the woman who completes the man in me

Who am I apart from you- apart from your love?

Nothing will suffice. No amount is enough.

All things which surround you fade away

You are the only presence. the shining light that fills my days

It is only you who can be the one at my side

I must let you know. Even though i have no greater fear than being denied

For I see you in my dreams I feel you in my heart

I dont know how to live life without you. I wouldn't know where to start

I am so happy just to know who you are

For some search distant lands near and far

To find that one person to whom they belong

Well i have found you. I know your the one. There is no need to search on

And even if you do not love me in return

I will always remember you as my love and it will only be you for which i yearn

Even if it is your love that i lack

I will love you no matter what. For i can only love without holding back.

I have searched the stars and looked to the heavens hoping that you will not turn away from me

Without you who would i be?

What would i do? Where would i go?

Whatever fate has for me i will accept. But i love you... This is what i know!











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Re: Who could love you more than I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 07:36:28 PM AEST
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This is very good. And it goes deep. I like it.
Kimmie_mac


Re: Who could love you more than I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 11:47:56 PM AEST
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this is a very good write, i have friends I`m sending to read, good job, Crow


Re: Who could love you more than I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 11:53:53 PM AEST
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this is a very good write ...touches the heart

Shari


Re: Who could love you more than I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:46:55 AM AEST
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Great poem. Beautifully said.




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