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Array ( [sid] => 22841 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Bitter Day [time] => 2003-09-06 18:05:00 [hometext] => A short piece [bodytext] => A heart so heavy once more,
to deny me the right to
cry at a grave.

From the mountains
my homeland, they cast a child,
heart does not matter,
a difference in blood.

Blinded by what I never could take,
eye to eye not one stands true.

Paled and weak from false
gods they buy, "a man is born
from the child.

Through the meadows and mountains
a new silence is heard, the earth
welcomes you, "this bitter day.......Crow

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Bitter Day

Contributed by crow on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

A heart so heavy once more,
to deny me the right to
cry at a grave.

From the mountains
my homeland, they cast a child,
heart does not matter,
a difference in blood.

Blinded by what I never could take,
eye to eye not one stands true.

Paled and weak from false
gods they buy, "a man is born
from the child.

Through the meadows and mountains
a new silence is heard, the earth
welcomes you, "this bitter day.......Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-09-06 18:05:00]
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Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:16:35 PM AEST
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Awesome
Shari

Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:17:48 PM AEST
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crow, you are incredible. this touched me deeply; your words are sorrow, opened up. i hope you never stop the telling...

Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:07:03 PM AEST
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This is sad. Good poem but sad. kimmie_mac

Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 11:30:27 PM AEST
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wonderful poem but sad hope all is well
michelle

Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:42:29 AM AEST
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Great write..
Jenni

Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 01:32:02 AM AEST
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the last words remind of a cold day in november.....many years ago.....
the earth welcomes you....... yes!!!

Re: Bitter Day (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:16:07 AM AEST
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Crow, where you get these awesome words i know....
For you have to be inspired to let them unfold somehow!
Standing at a grave and you cannot cry....
how many times I;ve done that and had to turn and say goodbye!
Your poems are so "telling" for me Crow.
You make me understand the way I truly feel, but could never deal with the feelings you make real!
Thanking you Crow for making me feel and shed tears for.....what it is I've been looking and wanting to feel for years!
Such a "telling" poem!
lovingcritters
Connie

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