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Array ( [sid] => 22821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => goodbye my cyn [time] => 2003-09-06 08:05:00 [hometext] => cynthia: i have been there through it all with you, and i will continue to be there for you, but i can no longer live only for your happyness that will never show [bodytext] => Through the years I have cared for you,
Lived my life for you,
Done all I can for you.

All I want is to give you a glimpse of pure satisfaction.
To see you truly smile,
For you to want to live your life.

I always thought I would never let you go,
That I would do anything for you,
Give you all I can and more.

But now I find I am tired and my energy is gone,
It’s hard enough just living my life,
There’s little left for you.

I would still try if I thought I could help,
Make some change,
Or anything at all.

But through the years I’ve tried and you’re not better,
You’re not even the same,
In fact you’re worse.

They say I can’t help until you want help,
Until you’ll accept it,
Until you don’t want to be depressed.

I think its because I can’t,
I’m useless,
Unable.

So I’m letting you go out on your own,
No help unless you ask,
Your life is now your own. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 55 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

goodbye my cyn

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Through the years I have cared for you,
Lived my life for you,
Done all I can for you.

All I want is to give you a glimpse of pure satisfaction.
To see you truly smile,
For you to want to live your life.

I always thought I would never let you go,
That I would do anything for you,
Give you all I can and more.

But now I find I am tired and my energy is gone,
It’s hard enough just living my life,
There’s little left for you.

I would still try if I thought I could help,
Make some change,
Or anything at all.

But through the years I’ve tried and you’re not better,
You’re not even the same,
In fact you’re worse.

They say I can’t help until you want help,
Until you’ll accept it,
Until you don’t want to be depressed.

I think its because I can’t,
I’m useless,
Unable.

So I’m letting you go out on your own,
No help unless you ask,
Your life is now your own.

Copyright Â© hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-09-06 08:05:00]
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Re: goodbye my cyn (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 11:32:07 AM AEST
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beautiful...sad...

Re: goodbye my cyn (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 04:58:48 PM AEST
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sad but true, I wish love and luck to you.
Kimmie_mac

Re: goodbye my cyn (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 03:49:52 AM AEST
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the fact that you tried in the first place speaks volumes about you. most people just hash out some tired line, "tough it out" or "it's not that bad" and think that they've actually done something. i admire the fact that you did everything you could to help her. but, as you said, in the end it is up to her. if she doesn't want help, then there is nothing you can do. this was an incredible piece.

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