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I remembered today, when you would wake to share my night
The warmth of a thousand smiles,touched me deep inside
Then the bitter tears fell,as I slipped back to reality
Looking at the clock,I wondered how much longer it would be

I leave myself no spare moments,for I think of you in these times
As often before, left open again,knowing you'll never be mine
Precious few are my heartfelt words,yet they hold the hurt in me
Surely I will find my peace,but how much longer will it be

Each day like an ongoing poem,that has no journeys end
Nor does it hold the rhythmic beauty,seems I've lost the will to pen
Only sadness can spill onto the pages,my tears are all I can see
How much longer do I need to hurt,before my heart will set you free [comments] => 8 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 22 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

How Much Longer

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I remembered today, when you would wake to share my night
The warmth of a thousand smiles,touched me deep inside
Then the bitter tears fell,as I slipped back to reality
Looking at the clock,I wondered how much longer it would be

I leave myself no spare moments,for I think of you in these times
As often before, left open again,knowing you'll never be mine
Precious few are my heartfelt words,yet they hold the hurt in me
Surely I will find my peace,but how much longer will it be

Each day like an ongoing poem,that has no journeys end
Nor does it hold the rhythmic beauty,seems I've lost the will to pen
Only sadness can spill onto the pages,my tears are all I can see
How much longer do I need to hurt,before my heart will set you free

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-09-06 06:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:06:02 AM AEST
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bittersweet, brought back memories and thoughts I have had
Shari

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:52:05 PM AEST
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elegance and strength here in a painful write
i do like your work. Crow

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:09:07 PM AEST
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Another good poem. I like reading your work.
Kimmie_mac

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 09:49:27 PM AEST
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I know that I've been here before. I relate well to your beautiful, poetic words.

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:30:56 PM AEST
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i wonder as well...this is so expressive and beautifully written

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:52:14 AM AEST
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A lovely heartfelt write ... take care, Jan

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:40:57 AM AEST
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YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A IMMORAL BITCH
GOD WILL SEE YOU GET YOURS.

Re: How Much Longer (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 03:16:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sentimental write - love your work - and yes we have all had these feelings at one time or anther

merry

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