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Array ( [sid] => 22815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wasted By Your Blast [time] => 2003-09-06 05:05:00 [hometext] => An older one but the memory still has some bite if I think on it too long... [bodytext] =>
Writing with no passion,rhythm has its doubt
Venting my emotions,turning inside out
Pacing wooden floors,in the dead of night
Tears of wax forming,within the candlelight
Baileys half received,with just a hint of ice
Numbing all the hurt,as your words take a slice
Leaving me in pieces,so confused,lost and hurt
My smile a distant memory,as I crumble just like dirt
I light a cigarette,then watch it burn away
Contemplating endlessly,living another day
Waiting for my fighting spirit,to make another show
Waiting...still waiting,I'm late, I have to go

Close my mind, shut off my breath
Forever free in starry death
Kissed by tears that stain the face
For someone gone I can't replace
She is no more,her spirit gone
Watched her slip,fall far from
Where she would once fight again
Find her solace in the rain
Now the dark,her cloak of black
Takes her away,she doesn't look back [comments] => 5 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Wasted By Your Blast

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




Writing with no passion,rhythm has its doubt
Venting my emotions,turning inside out
Pacing wooden floors,in the dead of night
Tears of wax forming,within the candlelight
Baileys half received,with just a hint of ice
Numbing all the hurt,as your words take a slice
Leaving me in pieces,so confused,lost and hurt
My smile a distant memory,as I crumble just like dirt
I light a cigarette,then watch it burn away
Contemplating endlessly,living another day
Waiting for my fighting spirit,to make another show
Waiting...still waiting,I'm late, I have to go

Close my mind, shut off my breath
Forever free in starry death
Kissed by tears that stain the face
For someone gone I can't replace
She is no more,her spirit gone
Watched her slip,fall far from
Where she would once fight again
Find her solace in the rain
Now the dark,her cloak of black
Takes her away,she doesn't look back




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-09-06 05:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Wasted By Your Blast (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:15:20 AM AEST
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what a kickin' poem, great energy, great movement of thought, just class,
paul


Re: Wasted By Your Blast (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:28:29 PM AEST
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you write well of pain as well as beauty, good work, Crow


Re: Wasted By Your Blast (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:11:43 PM AEST
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Good write. Kimmie_mac


Re: Wasted By Your Blast (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 09:51:25 PM AEST
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Such a sad poem, but so incredibly penned.


Re: Wasted By Your Blast (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
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I like the difference in meter in the two verses ... painful memories, but a wonderful write ... Jan




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