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Feels like I climbed a mountain, just to fall back down
Seems to me, the one chance I had I destroyed,
one shot to be really happy for once...and didn't take it
It's ironic how when I know somebody likes me,
that I don't feel the same, 'til it's too late...

And what are they all for?
All these poems that I have written
And all the sweet dreams that I've dreamt
they always had something to do with you,
but I guess every one of those things,
were just all for nothing...

And now I'm writing through my tears...
As I think of that night that I fell in love with you,
it was on a starry night on the corner of your street,
there was a little gust of wind when it all happened
And now with every gust of wind that I feel,
I get that feeling...that feeling of love for you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

With Every Gust of Wind...

Contributed by Stalkee on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I took my pictures of you, I took 'em down
Feels like I climbed a mountain, just to fall back down
Seems to me, the one chance I had I destroyed,
one shot to be really happy for once...and didn't take it
It's ironic how when I know somebody likes me,
that I don't feel the same, 'til it's too late...

And what are they all for?
All these poems that I have written
And all the sweet dreams that I've dreamt
they always had something to do with you,
but I guess every one of those things,
were just all for nothing...

And now I'm writing through my tears...
As I think of that night that I fell in love with you,
it was on a starry night on the corner of your street,
there was a little gust of wind when it all happened
And now with every gust of wind that I feel,
I get that feeling...that feeling of love for you

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-09-05 19:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: With Every Gust of Wind... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 07:44:39 PM AEST
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So much longing and heartfelt tears went into this poem. Always remember that heartbreak doesn't last forever, but your love will. It morph into a love for someone else and be twice as powerful as before. Love this poem!

Re: With Every Gust of Wind... (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:50:36 AM AEST
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a nice expressive write,
paul

Re: With Every Gust of Wind... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:45:44 PM AEST
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We all do that. But there will be another. Great poem. I can feel my own heart breaking. Kimmie_mac

Re: With Every Gust of Wind... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:34:18 AM AEST
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awwwww......... so sweet and genuine, hugs n' love nessa

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