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Carve a name for myself that would never ever fade.
I need to do lot's to prove myself,
I don't know when I would come out of this closed shelf.

I see people who are doing much better,
Few are the kinds you could call go getters.
I feel myself wrapped in a woollen sweater,
and writing this ode with a mind that fetters.

All of this gets me down sometimes,
But I get geared up when I hear the friendly chimes.
I know that I'll always have people with me.
Who would say "Iam the best there ever can be".
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The best there ever can be !

Contributed by ivy on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don't know when I'll do things that people would appreciate,
Carve a name for myself that would never ever fade.
I need to do lot's to prove myself,
I don't know when I would come out of this closed shelf.

I see people who are doing much better,
Few are the kinds you could call go getters.
I feel myself wrapped in a woollen sweater,
and writing this ode with a mind that fetters.

All of this gets me down sometimes,
But I get geared up when I hear the friendly chimes.
I know that I'll always have people with me.
Who would say "Iam the best there ever can be".

Copyright © ivy ... [ 2003-09-05 12:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The best there ever can be ! (User Rating: 1 )
by POOBEAR on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:42:05 PM AEST
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Good for you!! this is a wonderful write.
Keep up the positive thinking and
the great writing.

Take Care,
POOBEAR

Re: The best there ever can be ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 05:49:25 PM AEST
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Very good one, indeed. Well done!
Saira

Re: The best there ever can be ! (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Poet on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 07:40:37 AM AEST
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Nice lil Poem!! Great to see the +ve's in the -ve's !!!!

Keep em coming

Re: The best there ever can be ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Damien on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:12:00 AM AEST
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You have locked yourself in your own minds shelf so just open it and see how things appear totally different, cause the way I (and I'm sure a lot of others too) see it, you already are the best :)

Re: The best there ever can be ! (User Rating: 1 )
by johnnywords on Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 03:07:55 PM AEST
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Good write. Keep 'em coming!

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