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Array ( [sid] => 22739 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Angel My Lifesaver My friend [time] => 2003-09-04 15:05:00 [hometext] => I was sitting in math class bored so i tought of an old friend i lost touch with and i just wrote what was on my mind that i could not say [bodytext] => My angel, my lifesaver, my friend
I worry for you each and every day
You look so sick lately
Not like yourself at all
Is it my fault that you don’t care any more?
Did I do this to you when I left?
But every time I ask you
You just say don’t worry and just drop it
But I can’t take seeing you like this
You say don’t worry it has nothing to do with you
But I know all to well that your lying to me
My angel, my lifesaver, my friend
Please there’s no need for lies
I can see through your masks
I can see your future
And has a sad outcome
My angel, my lifesaver, my friend
Please listen to my call
Get off that path of destruction that you’re on
I know all to well what it is like to bury a friend
I went through it once and I’m not welling to go through it again
So please hear me out
If you die now then we all miss out
I can’t go on with life without you there
A new life is hard enough without the loss of a friend
So please my angel, my lifesaver, my friend
If you keep on this path
Then I’ll be with you until your very end
But no matter what
Just remember you’re my angel, my lifesaver, my best friend
And I’ll love you until the very end

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 320 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Suboshi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
My Angel My Lifesaver My friend

Contributed by Suboshi on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



My angel, my lifesaver, my friend
I worry for you each and every day
You look so sick lately
Not like yourself at all
Is it my fault that you don’t care any more?
Did I do this to you when I left?
But every time I ask you
You just say don’t worry and just drop it
But I can’t take seeing you like this
You say don’t worry it has nothing to do with you
But I know all to well that your lying to me
My angel, my lifesaver, my friend
Please there’s no need for lies
I can see through your masks
I can see your future
And has a sad outcome
My angel, my lifesaver, my friend
Please listen to my call
Get off that path of destruction that you’re on
I know all to well what it is like to bury a friend
I went through it once and I’m not welling to go through it again
So please hear me out
If you die now then we all miss out
I can’t go on with life without you there
A new life is hard enough without the loss of a friend
So please my angel, my lifesaver, my friend
If you keep on this path
Then I’ll be with you until your very end
But no matter what
Just remember you’re my angel, my lifesaver, my best friend
And I’ll love you until the very end





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Re: My Angel My Lifesaver My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 03:33:50 PM AEST
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I REALLY LIKE THIS AND I WANT YOU TO KNOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD. I THINK YOU NEED TO MAKE MORE PEOMS. THIS FRIEND IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE YOU.


Re: My Angel My Lifesaver My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 04:03:53 PM AEST
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a very nice write, it works really well, i look forward to reading more,
paul


Re: My Angel My Lifesaver My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 05:31:41 PM AEST
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this is great. I reallly l ike this.. I hope your friend reads this and hope that they are alright. kimmie_mac




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