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[sid] => 22734
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Black
[time] => 2003-09-04 12:35:00
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[bodytext] => I am lucky
But feel luckless,
I am blessed
But ungrateful,
Happiness all around me
But blind to see,
Vibrant colors stand before me
But all I see is black,
A certain shade of black.
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[ratings] => 4
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[topicname] => DarkPoetry
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Black
Contributed by
Saira
on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am lucky
But feel luckless,
I am blessed
But ungrateful,
Happiness all around me
But blind to see,
Vibrant colors stand before me
But all I see is black,
A certain shade of black.
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-09-04 12:35:00]
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Re: Black
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 06:40:03 PM AEST
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I have felt that blackness
Shari |
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Re: Black
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by Crow on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:37:26 PM AEST
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| hope your good, mad me kind-of-sad, good write. Crow |
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Re: Black
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:48:49 PM AEST
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My dear friend, Saira,
it's the irony of it all my dear friend.
When looking out from within...
Colors many hues, some thick, some thin...
Green for life, Black for death....where does it all end!
I love your poetry Siara...takes me places I've never been.
Wonderful....I'm so glad I can read your poems again!
Connie |
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Re: Black
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 08:06:04 PM AEST
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Hey, me too!! lol. Great poem, I really like it.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Black
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by PoloRM on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:44:27 AM AEST
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| So few words... so many meanings. Great write. |
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Re: Black
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 05:07:48 PM AEST
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Now you have reminded me of a shade of grey... This is well put in such a brief poem.
Hope your eyes open and you behold a rainbow!!!!!! ::::smiles::::::
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Black
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by venkat on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 01:37:04 AM AEST
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| Black is the only colour that can absorb all colours and all emotions..and it gives birth to all colors and all emotions..it represents gods power of action..venkat |
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Re: Black
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by Kimmie_mac on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:13:55 PM AEST
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| I truely like this. Great poem. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Black
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by Dark-Poet on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:37:40 PM AEST
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| Dark... and yet so meaning full... I think someone has already said this and I totally agree... "So few words, so many meanings" Sorry for not being able to use my own words (I'm speachless) but I felt those words did it justice... Great Job. |
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Re: Black
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:24:06 PM AEST
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| simply wonderful, so much expressed within' hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Black
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:14:05 PM AEST
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this is my favorite!
Love----Nida |
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Re: Black
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 07:14:50 PM AEST
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| u didn't said much, and somehow said everything : ) ----- kj ( another crab) |
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